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This is My Desire

February 17, 2010
By numbheart21 GOLD, Antipolo, Other
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Heal this wounded heart and make it cleaner
Open these closed eyes to the things I see
Accept me though I am a great sinner
Show me how to love like you have loved me
The one thing I asked is to be captured
And be surrounded only by your love
For due to your presence I feel secured
And laughters of angels overcome sobs
This is my desire thy honor be raised
For Lord, with all my heart I worship you
All I have within me I give you praise
And every breath I take I offer too
For you are the potter, I am the clay
You are the director, of my play

The author's comments:
eversince i learned how to write a sonnet, i can't stop writing one. i got inspired by the religious songs i heard one night and i ended up writing this.:D
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ShenelleCrystal SILVER said...
on Jun. 18 2010 at 2:16 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
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Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

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That was so good !  Don't ever stop  writing :)

Please come and check out my poems [comment or rate] Thank u

Milo! said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 8:33 pm
I agree. It's great!
numbheart21 GOLD said...
on Feb. 24 2010 at 3:32 am
numbheart21 GOLD, Antipolo, Other
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Thanks!!:D
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 23 2010 at 2:38 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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This is a beautiful poem!
So well written and what wonderful words
I am a Christian also and some of my poems are A Gift, To Care, One Drop, The Solution, and You Will...u should check them out I think you would enjoy them:)
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 23 2010 at 2:36 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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This is a beautiful poem!
So well written and what wonderful words
I am a Christian also and some of my Christian poems are A Gift, To Care, One Drop, The Solution, and You Will...u should check them out I think you would enjoy them:)
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 23 2010 at 2:34 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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This a beautiful poem
So well written and the words are wonderful!
It is so great to see there's a fellow Christian on here!
Some of my Christian poems are: Your Will, The Solution, One Drop, and To Care. You should check them out sometime...I rly think u would enjoy them:)
Jacee007 GOLD said...
on Feb. 23 2010 at 2:30 pm
Jacee007 GOLD, Westland, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Today is the Tomorrow you were worrying about Yesterday. The journey of a lifetime begins with one single step. Negativity is the downfall of dreams. It's not the quantity of friends that matters it's the quality.

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Wow this is an amazing poem! I love it!