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Heart of Steel

November 30, 2010
By Abwell BRONZE, Greer, South Carolina
Abwell BRONZE, Greer, South Carolina
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My love in my heart died
And then it filled with sadness
Many people asked me why
My life began flowing with madness

They gave me their love and hugs
But I knew they weren't divine
I felt as if my life was full of bugs
And my mouth was a straight line

I kept moving day by day
With a scowl and a fowl look
And spend my time planning on running away
I feel like dirt and soot

Till' one day Jesus tugged at my heart
And I knew that I could have a brand new start.



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on Dec. 24 2010 at 3:47 pm
SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't punish yourself," she heard her say again, but there would be punishment and pain, and there would be happiness too. That was writing."
--Markus Zusak, "The Book Thief"

This is really great, I love it!!!!!

Abwell BRONZE said...
on Dec. 20 2010 at 11:05 pm
Abwell BRONZE, Greer, South Carolina
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hope you enjoyed my writing...