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January 15, 2011
By lilred1025 GOLD, Warren, Ohio
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Confused and lost in her thoughts
Trying to separate thoughts
But ends up making them worse.
She can never get a solid idea in her head
She tries to make one
But just sits there and cries.
She goes with the flow
And says what she wants to who she wants.
She cant stop and think or else it turns out worse

© Elaina B., Waterloo, NY

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lilred1025 GOLD said...
on Jan. 29 2011 at 5:08 pm
lilred1025 GOLD, Warren, Ohio
11 articles 5 photos 4 comments

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♥if you love two people pick the second one. if you truly loved the first you wouldnt have fallen for the second♥

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Okay and thank you. if you would look at some of my other stuff that would be cool too
Karma_Crow PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 26 2011 at 7:58 am
Karma_Crow PLATINUM, Savannah, Georgia
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"Behold thy sorrow of the tears that streak down our cheek and made upon of what he is. Behold our sorrow that we hold within us. Show ye thee of the how we feel of each of us."- Lestat

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This is quite wonderful and I enjoy it.

 

Keep up the good work ^^

 

I ask once more of one thing...if you can look at my writing. Rate it/coment, it does not matter.