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A Passion

May 5, 2011
By Frenchie15 GOLD, Northcharleston, South Carolina
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Frenchie15 GOLD, Northcharleston, South Carolina
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"Show no love, and feel no pain"...self quote

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No feelings can compare to the ones you have for me.None can touch the ones I have for you.When i see you I flutter with glee,For to you,no harm i can do.To you my love is true.

When you walk down the street i cant help but to stare,It's you i want to meet with your soothing hair.Your midnight blue eyes put me in a daze,and you posses a great personality which purifies my heart and takes the pain away!!!!!!!

© Daniel M., Phoenix, AZ

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Frenchie15 GOLD said...
on Feb. 9 2012 at 1:37 pm
Frenchie15 GOLD, Northcharleston, South Carolina
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&quot;Show no love, and feel no pain&quot;...self quote

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alright.thanks for the input
Frenchie15 GOLD said...
on Feb. 9 2012 at 1:36 pm
Frenchie15 GOLD, Northcharleston, South Carolina
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thanks.although i wrote this randomly
beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 9 2012 at 6:06 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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The words are good, but the way your poem is organized looks too jumbled. I would suggest that you separate the lines, so it doesn't seem like a first draft.
Frenchie15 GOLD said...
on Jan. 5 2012 at 2:56 pm
Frenchie15 GOLD, Northcharleston, South Carolina
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well lets say 4:00 pm.......next monday.....if you feel comfortable with giving me your email then can u give it to me because other wise we cant talk
Frenchie15 GOLD said...
on Jan. 4 2012 at 2:57 pm
Frenchie15 GOLD, Northcharleston, South Carolina
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alright then ill corect myself the next time
Frenchie15 GOLD said...
on Dec. 24 2011 at 2:51 pm
Frenchie15 GOLD, Northcharleston, South Carolina
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love stinks and everyone just keep checking on here...im trying to publish more frequently now...hope you enjoy
musicmissy SILVER said...
on Dec. 19 2011 at 5:33 pm
musicmissy SILVER, Orlando, Florida
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&quot;Knock knock who&#039;s there we are&quot; by Daniel Beaty

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Okay u give me a time and date
FatesMistake13 said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 11:41 pm
FatesMistake13, Springerville, Arizona
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&quot;Most people die of a sort of creeping common sense, and discover when it is too late that the only things one never regrets are one&#039;s mistakes.&quot; Oscar Wilde <br /> <br /> &quot;The books that the world calls immoral are books that show the world its own shame.&quot;

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Aww this is adorabley cute :) love it muches
Frenchie15 GOLD said...
on Dec. 11 2011 at 9:51 am
Frenchie15 GOLD, Northcharleston, South Carolina
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thanks everyone....i do my best.....music missy...i think we should talk more....i have a few questions to ask you
Frenchie15 GOLD said...
on Dec. 11 2011 at 9:50 am
Frenchie15 GOLD, Northcharleston, South Carolina
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i think so too
musicmissy SILVER said...
on Dec. 10 2011 at 6:51 pm
musicmissy SILVER, Orlando, Florida
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Awww i think im in love with you
TheGracefulWriter BRONZE said...
on Dec. 9 2011 at 3:05 pm
TheGracefulWriter BRONZE, Cleghorn, Iowa
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It cute and sweet! Good job on it!
Lovestinks1395 GOLD said...
on Dec. 8 2011 at 4:22 pm
Lovestinks1395 GOLD, Plainfield, Illinois
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That was beautiful and creative. Continue writing, I would love to see more work from you!!!!!!!!
simbaspride SILVER said...
on Dec. 7 2011 at 9:05 pm
simbaspride SILVER, Keene, Virginia
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Cute. <3 I really like it. 

5/5 

Some grammatical errrors but other than that it's great. :)