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Who Cares?

June 2, 2011
By Dominicano_Loco PLATINUM, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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Dominicano_Loco PLATINUM, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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"Live and learn, and when ya fall, Stand Strong and come back!"/"I'm goin to regrett this 1 tomorrow."

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If I were to leave today
To go and never come home
Would anyone realize my departure?
Search the woods with a fine-tooth comb?

My brother already has taken my place
My family praises his sports and grades
Where I know my works can never compare
I feel abandoned beneath this barricade

Who among my friends would truly know
If I met with a grisly fate
If I went missing and was never heard from again
Their own lives would facilitate

I feel stripped of love and lain bare
Alone in a world where no one cares.

© Danielle N., Highland Village, TX

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Feeling Alone in the world is the worst feeling ever :(
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MissUnderStood.2011 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 6 2011 at 12:44 pm
MissUnderStood.2011 BRONZE, Sugarhill, Georgia
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Romans 12:2-4 Read It!!

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This is Beautiful. You have talent talent!. And whenever you feel like No One Care, always remember Jesus Care :)

And i CAre about you.. Check out my work! Love, Shanajya Spencer