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November 14, 2011
By ShawnaJ PLATINUM, Bismarck, Arkansas
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ShawnaJ PLATINUM, Bismarck, Arkansas
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If you fail once, it doesn't mean you're going to fail at everything.

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My heart is beating,
Slow enough to kill.
Can anyone save me?
I don't think anyone will.
My eyes are dark,
My spirit lost.
I can't take back,
What I've cost.
Covered in shame,
I'm tired of crying.
Sick of living,
I'm done trying.
Pain that fills my body,
More and more each day.
With so many tears,
I don't have anything to say.
But my heart is beating,
Slow enough to kill.
Would anyone save me?
I don't think anyone will.

© Alissa H., Double Oak, TX

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ShawnaJ PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 18 2012 at 10:55 am
ShawnaJ PLATINUM, Bismarck, Arkansas
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If you fail once, it doesn't mean you're going to fail at everything.

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Thanks so much!! Ive been needing to write more, but i've been really busy lately. Though i am writing a book. (:
Mynameislindsayy SILVER said...
on Nov. 20 2011 at 10:12 pm
Mynameislindsayy SILVER, Seattle, Washington
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"I'd rather just except who I am, what's the use of trying to change?"

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Oh my gosh I'm In love with this poem! I reallllyyy love it!!!! I like how it loops around like that... it perfectly fits this poem. This is just great! Love it so much.