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To Just Move On

January 26, 2012
By TheUnknownMe SILVER, Hartford, Michigan
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Work to make a living, but don&#039;t live to work.<br /> A picture is worth a thousand words, but is a thousand words worth a picture. <br /> A true artist looks into themselve and finds their inmost feelings, while a creative person sees color and form.

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When shadowed hearts let out sorrowful cries,
Our hearts harmonize to the same song.
Together, our tears fall from crying eyes, as we bid lost love it's last so long.
Begging for relief from loss of that love.
"Take away this pain in short span of time!
Love! Not pain! That I am deprived of!
Bring back! What I once thought was mine!"
But no, I cry fro what my lost love cost,
And then I find happy light once again.
No longer will I think of who I lost,
I am surrounded by peace, love, and zen.
Sucked from my mind, by the love I now found.
I slowly forget why I cried or frowned.

© Becky F., Sacramento, CA

The author's comments:
This poem is based on trying to get over an ex. You basicly want who ever broke you're heart, but you slowly move on. That person that you moved on to ends up making you forget the bad and focus on all the good.
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TheUnknownMe SILVER said...
on Jun. 19 2012 at 4:44 pm
TheUnknownMe SILVER, Hartford, Michigan
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Work to make a living, but don&#039;t live to work.<br /> A picture is worth a thousand words, but is a thousand words worth a picture. <br /> A true artist looks into themselve and finds their inmost feelings, while a creative person sees color and form.

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Thank you.

 

HaleyS. GOLD said...
on Feb. 4 2012 at 3:44 pm
HaleyS. GOLD, Byram, Mississippi
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If you drown, at least die knowing you were headed for the shore.<br /> -Ray Bradbury

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That's true, good rhyme