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Sonnet of love

April 10, 2013
By MMOON PLATINUM, Bellingham, Washington
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MMOON PLATINUM, Bellingham, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sop being afriad of what could go wrong. Start being positive about what could go right&quot;<br /> I also have another &quot;Loving someone is like hugging a cactus. The harder you hold the more it hurts&quot;

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Oh he’s so lovely as a roses thorn
Lost for pain crossing though battlefields
And if by loving you I’m forever torn
Heartache has caused me to put up a shied
Your eyes always piercing deep in my soul
Your heart never giving for too much at stake
So therefore I have paid the ultimate toll
My desire was too much for you to take
Everything I wish beckons me to tell
All my memories go up in fire
My saddened future drowning in a well
You have shown yourself to be a liar
My heart never looking to my long past
My heart aching will again bloom at last.

© Emily B., Houston, TX

The author's comments:
I wrote a sonnet about love and heartbreak because I am in love with someone who doesn't love me back. Everyone should know that there is someone out there for you, and you have to let that person in. Don't let someone who doesn't love you, make you not love again.
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Vampiregirl23 said...
on Apr. 15 2013 at 11:58 pm
Vampiregirl23, Madison Heights, Michigan
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I love it. It flows beautifully, and I actually found myself feeling better. I have gone through the same thing.