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Numbness

June 16, 2014
By cojoputz BRONZE, Burlington, Massachusetts
cojoputz BRONZE, Burlington, Massachusetts
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My life is quiet now that his
Voice is absent from my life,
Which used to fill my heart and home.
The pain is pulsing through the knife

That lies now deep within my heart.
The breakfast table feels empty
Without him, when I’m about
To start the day, with some coffee.

The sickness known as fear resides
In me constantly. I’m in walls
That trap me within nightmares I
Relive, of getting the call.

The call that I now wish would come
And end my fear and leave me numb.


The author's comments:
This piece is about a parent struggling with the difficulties of having a child in the military.

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on Jun. 20 2014 at 9:55 am
Princess.Renda GOLD, Travelers Rest, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"All the world is made of faith, trust, and pixie dust." --J.M. Barrie, Peter Pan

As a child of a parent in the military, I can really identify with this. It was very well written :)

ktpustizzi said...
on Jun. 18 2014 at 4:50 pm
An amazingly constructed sonnet!