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Elven Lore MAG

September 23, 2015
By Samtom311 PLATINUM, Delray Beach, Florida
Samtom311 PLATINUM, Delray Beach, Florida
27 articles 3 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I worship individuals for their highest possibilities as individuals, and I loathe humanity, for its failure to live up to these possibilities." -Ayn Rand


Hail to the king, and his deathless people!
Whose majestic blood spilt upon the Earth,
Sprinkling the holy English peepul,
And from to, emerged endless breathing worth.
Hail to the queen, and her deathless subjects!
Of which graceful, long strides and pointed ears,
Circled dances and of beauty, respects,
A river of the sun’s liquid gold tears.
Hail to the heirs, whose presence defies all!
As they conquer those who rebel their rule,
With their persistence, make mere mortals crawl,
Like sirens, their vanity conceives fools.
Hail to the fine family of elven lore!
Who exist only in the mind of yore.



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on Oct. 20 2015 at 5:17 pm
Samtom311 PLATINUM, Delray Beach, Florida
27 articles 3 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I worship individuals for their highest possibilities as individuals, and I loathe humanity, for its failure to live up to these possibilities." -Ayn Rand

Aw! Thank you so much for your comment, Hannah! It really means a lot. :) Haha the same can be said about you with free verse poems! XD

Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Oct. 19 2015 at 8:00 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them.&quot;<br /> Henry David Thoreau<br /> <br /> &quot;I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once.&quot;<br /> John Green

Gorgeous imagery, I love the mystical feeling this poem conveys. I feel like I'm in an ancient, reality-defying land when I read this poem haha. I've never been very good at writing sonnets, as you know, but you make it look so easy and effortless. Great job, Lisha! Never stop writing! (P.S) I truly think you should submit this elsewhere as well :)