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Chocolate Covered Marshmallow

January 19, 2012
By Catch SILVER, Willow Springs, Missouri
Catch SILVER, Willow Springs, Missouri
9 articles 10 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never ever give up! Don't listen to what people say they will just try to shove you in the dirt. Listen to your heart.


I was 14 and in Softball. He was 14 and in football and track. We sat next to each other in our Physics class. I always wondered how he never knew I liked him?!
The class is always energetic when I enter the physics room (somehow I am always the last one in the class room) When I walk in Dakota always looks up from what he Is doing and says, “Hi” to me. When I sit down in my chair he scoots over next to me (originally we sit a seat apart). Ever since last year in eighth grade I have got in a habit of drawing a cross on his arm, so when he scoots over I get out my pen and on his shoulder I outline a cross and color it in with a brown sharpie. Dakota is usually always tired, like me, because we practice our sport every day we don’t have a game. I have a game 3 times a week and he has 2 games a week. We never fall behind in school even though we don’t have much time to do it.

Rose W.

Chocolate Covered Marshmallow

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on Jan. 8 2013 at 7:27 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
72 articles 0 photos 860 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

I think you have a really great storyline, but there are lots of grammar errors, puncuation errors, and run on sentences. Those need to be fixed! You've got a great story, otherwise. I couldn't put it down