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The Mirage

January 8, 2012
By theSe7enthSin BRONZE, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
theSe7enthSin BRONZE, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
3 articles 0 photos 22 comments


Marci's sister Valerie has vanished, but not without a trace. Bits of evidence are found, piece by piece. Eventually a body is uncovered. Valerie. The police suspect suicide but everything is not what it seems. Was it really suicide or premeditated homicide? It's up to Marci to solve the case when the police fail to read between the lines.


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on Nov. 15 2012 at 5:48 pm
Freckles3 BRONZE, ------------, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"The universe is not only queerer than we suppose; it is queerer than we can suppose."
~J.B.S. Haldane

Really great story, but I think it should be made a little less obvious who did it. I knew the whole time. Still, I was captivated from Chapter One on!

on Feb. 14 2012 at 5:39 am
ILoveWritingAlot BRONZE, E, Other
3 articles 5 photos 57 comments

Favorite Quote:
Every end is a new beginning;
What a caterpillar calls an end the rest of the world calls a butterfly;
There never was a good war, or a bad peace.;
“People will believe anything if you whisper it.”
“Where words fail, Music speaks”

Really nice please see my book too!

on Jan. 23 2012 at 10:25 am
theSe7enthSin BRONZE, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
3 articles 0 photos 22 comments
thanks and yeah i'll check out ur story :)

on Jan. 22 2012 at 2:13 pm
AddieLongo BRONZE, Highland, California
3 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Kill or Be Killed."
"The only to fear, is fear itself".

This is very good. I'm curious to where it's going to go. And the Marci girl...Ugh. I want to hit her. If I had a sister like You should check out my story as well :)