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Love

November 7, 2023
By Anonymous

She has a broken heart. She couldn’t understand love since she was born, she can’t feel it. Her mom loves her and she gave her the most but still she can't feel it… “love feels nothing”. She can’t trust anyone, even herself. She was afraid of someone who would betray her. When she walked into a random street, “couples” were chatting romantically, it seemed perfect but she felt there’s something off. 


            But one day, the girl visited her aunt and she was shocked. Look at how bright it was when her aunt was helping with her uncle, they never hate or argue because their hearts are   connected and never break. The girl started to realize the truth of love. When she walked to the random street again, she found out no one was there, only herself. She never saw the “couples” again. 


The author's comments:

I always like to create a story by using my imagination or something experience.

For my set piece, I wrote about my opinion about love and how it feels. I describe my feelings from a third person point of view which is based on Raymond Carver. 


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