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How I Judge

March 28, 2009
By Bridie ELITE, Massapequa, New York
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Bridie ELITE, Massapequa, New York
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She can because she thinks she can.

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I call them by name,
Not by looks but by acts,
What they say have no effect.
Now she sits in this empty house
Not knowing what will come next because
Of you she is afraid, her life
Destroyed and now I have
Judged what fools
You are as you feed off
Of pain lives of pure
Precious souls are
Lost. Now I condemn
The to guilt for she
May never be
Saved.

© Dana D., Gansevoort, NY

The author's comments:
sometimes I have no idea what I'm talking about and I let the the pen guide my hand on the paper. But if I truely have to say what it's about I'd have to say my friend and her last boyfriend.
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Hay_Wire PLATINUM said...
on May. 28 2009 at 11:52 pm
Hay_Wire PLATINUM, Independence, Missouri
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wow.. thats really great. know what you mean about writing, though.. it just comes out, and your like.. huh. thats what i was thinkin? yeah..and thanks for your comments.. its good to know what people think.. i love your work :)