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Yet Again...

May 2, 2009
By xodistantdreamerxo BRONZE, South Jersey, New Jersey
xodistantdreamerxo BRONZE, South Jersey, New Jersey
3 articles 1 photo 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over. Smile because it happened." -Dr. Seuss


Paranoia sets in
As the last light fades away
Images
Of the old days
Set and spin
Forever will the memories stay
As I try to stop the replay
This infection
You let control
Now will take both our souls
Oh how I've tried to tell you
This isn't the only way
But you never listened
Not even for a day
You had to insist
Not you but I was all to blame
I see you in the distance
As you walk away...
Yet again

The author's comments:
Thanks for reading this and I am always looking for suggestions and critique, so comments are greatly appreciated. Thank you =)

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on Apr. 17 2010 at 3:43 pm
elfiewrites BRONZE, Hillsdale, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"The seat of knowledge is in the head, of wisdom, in the heart."~William Hazlitt
"Be yourself, everyone else is taken."

EXCELLENT! I love this! Keep on writing! Please, if you get the chance, give me feedback on some of my work too! Much appreciated. Keep up the good work

on Mar. 14 2010 at 8:21 am
xodistantdreamerxo BRONZE, South Jersey, New Jersey
3 articles 1 photo 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over. Smile because it happened." -Dr. Seuss

Thank you so much! I won't stop writing. It's something I love so I assure you I won't stop.

on Mar. 13 2010 at 3:48 pm
MyFairyTaleEnding SILVER, Villa Ridge, Missouri
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Well, it's the truth! :) You are SO very welcome. I promise to never give up. YOU ARE AMAZING AT WRITING. :D I mean it.

on Mar. 9 2010 at 11:50 am
xodistantdreamerxo BRONZE, South Jersey, New Jersey
3 articles 1 photo 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over. Smile because it happened." -Dr. Seuss

That is such a huge compliment to me, thank you so much! I can assure you that my poety didn't turn out like this overnight, and I still don't believe that my work is that amazing compared to others especially published writers. But, keep writing never give up! Thank you again, it truly does mean so much to me! :D

on Mar. 8 2010 at 9:34 pm
MyFairyTaleEnding SILVER, Villa Ridge, Missouri
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This is amazing! I totally can relate to it. You have TRUE talent there! My poems aren't that good. Not enough to make a room fall silent in true awe, like yours can. I love this! I'm adding this to my faves. GREAT JOB

on Mar. 7 2010 at 2:54 pm
xodistantdreamerxo BRONZE, South Jersey, New Jersey
3 articles 1 photo 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over. Smile because it happened." -Dr. Seuss

That's a huge compliment! Thank you so much! (:

on Mar. 7 2010 at 11:08 am
TheOnlyWritician GOLD, Clermont, Florida
11 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
We loved with a love that was more than love. -Edgar Allen Poe

so great that I added it to my favorites!

on Mar. 5 2010 at 7:00 pm
xodistantdreamerxo BRONZE, South Jersey, New Jersey
3 articles 1 photo 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over. Smile because it happened." -Dr. Seuss

Thank youuuuu! :D

on Mar. 5 2010 at 6:51 pm
Nikiblue PLATINUM, Bloomfield Hills, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Stupid Is As Stupid Does." -Forest Gump (;
"No one who achieves success does so without the help of others. The wise and confident acknowledge this help with gratitude."

That was powerful and relateable, very nice (:

Ambie BRONZE said...
on Mar. 5 2010 at 11:46 am
Ambie BRONZE, Millville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"If it can be dreamed, it can be done."

You're welcome!!!

on Mar. 4 2010 at 7:53 pm
xodistantdreamerxo BRONZE, South Jersey, New Jersey
3 articles 1 photo 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over. Smile because it happened." -Dr. Seuss

Wow, thank you! I truly do appreciate all the wonderful feedback and motivation! (:

Ambie BRONZE said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 6:29 pm
Ambie BRONZE, Millville, Pennsylvania
4 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If it can be dreamed, it can be done."

NICE!!! It's short, but interesting!!! You have major talent!!!

on Feb. 21 2010 at 1:13 pm
xodistantdreamerxo BRONZE, South Jersey, New Jersey
3 articles 1 photo 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over. Smile because it happened." -Dr. Seuss

Love you Ann! Thanks for all your support!

on Feb. 21 2010 at 1:09 pm
xodistantdreamerxo BRONZE, South Jersey, New Jersey
3 articles 1 photo 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over. Smile because it happened." -Dr. Seuss

Thanks so much!

on May. 23 2009 at 10:11 pm
MomoSaysRawrr BRONZE, Kankakee, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"In the end, everyone's going to hurt you. You just have to find the ones worth suffering for."
-Bob Marely

"Don't narrate... Paint! Draw! Build! CREATE!" -Jack London

AH-MAZING

AnnBeck said...
on May. 12 2009 at 9:58 pm
LOVE IT, YOU ROCK!<33 :]