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The World

June 19, 2009
By tactical_wolves BRONZE, Ashburn, Virginia
tactical_wolves BRONZE, Ashburn, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Remember, if the world did not suck, we would all fall off."

Do you know?

Do you know the world is vast?

It is an unexplored sea,

waiting to be discovered, if by no one else, then by me.

Have you seen?

Have you seen the world's true colors?

The world's truth draws me in deep,

As i see the beautiful wonders and weep.

Can you hear?

can you hear the world whisper?

The winds play a beautiful song,

While nature sweetly sungs along.

How does it tast?

How does it tast, the air so sweet?

The aroma curls around my being,

Leaving behind a sensational feeling.

Does it feel?

Does it feel, the earth i wonder?

As we trash its land,

Is it hurt by mankind's killing hand?

The author's comments:
This piece of poetry was ment for all to think, think about the world and what i am saying. Do you realize what the earth is telling us? Or do you just notice a plain thing to walk on, just a stepping stone for your own intentions? Think about this and reread my poem, hopefully you have thought of something else, and something clicked in your brain saying, "She's right, we are killing the world, we should realize its natural wonders," if this has not gotten close to going through your mind try a few more times.

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This article has 4 comments.

Mizotron GOLD said...
on Oct. 10 2009 at 8:12 am
Mizotron GOLD, Ashburn, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Writing is not just something to do, its what I am, and what i feel i should be, and thats how it should feel when you know you want to be a writer.
~Kimberly Lynn

This is pretty good. :D just keep writing, just keep writing, just keep writing, writing, writing :) ~Nemo :D

Author101 said...
on Jul. 23 2009 at 3:37 am
thnx for the help, i must have mistyped because i wrote it all out correctly, guess i just need to check over my work next time thnx bout that :D and thnx for the comments

on Jul. 8 2009 at 5:25 pm
OoODerekOoO BRONZE, Kinde, Michigan
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I like it. it's very good. you have a few spelling errors, but fix them, and your good to go. :) keep it up.

ZekeKana GOLD said...
on Jul. 7 2009 at 5:20 pm
ZekeKana GOLD, St. Peters, Missouri
10 articles 0 photos 2 comments
That was awesome it was stating a good point at the same time continue and youll do pretty well.