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Old Blue Jeans

September 25, 2009
By AubreyTRieder PLATINUM, Clark, New Jersey
AubreyTRieder PLATINUM, Clark, New Jersey
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I am as soft
and smooth as bricks
and as torn as
my old blue jeans,

and just like them
I am noble
enough to know
just what it means

to be in need
of a little
care, compassion,
and love once in

a while. I need
those three, and to
be forgiven
for all my sin.

I sit on the
brick stoop, with my
old blue jeans and
brand new hope

to someday smooth
the edges, fix these
tears and maybe
just learn to cope.


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on Jul. 12 2010 at 10:57 am
AubreyTRieder PLATINUM, Clark, New Jersey
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thanks!!! :D

on Jul. 12 2010 at 10:31 am
SlamminMan GOLD, Sandown, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
Live life to the fullest no matter what the stakes are.

i didn't read this one last time but i realy lik the way u wrote it and how it doesn't ryme (if thats how you spell it) but it is put together near perfect and it sounds beautiful

aub13zzz said...
on Jul. 4 2010 at 11:03 am
thanks! and sure :)

on Jul. 3 2010 at 12:34 pm
josiebelle SILVER, Waterford, Other
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i liked the methaphor of the jeans it was really well done!!

 

could you check out some of mine??