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January 10, 2010
By GreenLover SILVER, Anaheim, California
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I see a Blue Angel in the sky. He's watching over me up there. But he does not see Iam crying in tears for my feelings are hurt. But not even an angel, an Blue Angel in the sky can heel the sadness inside, for love has come but not to feel. The boy I love can only heel.

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BlueInk94 PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 30 2010 at 8:58 am
BlueInk94 PLATINUM, Valley Park, Missouri
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Wow this poem is o cute. I love the way you used 'heel'. If you have time please look at some of my poetry.
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Apr. 23 2010 at 8:16 am
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that was awwesome!
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 12:18 pm
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Wow I love the ending

It has a vry nice flow to it
xodistantdreamerxo BRONZE said...
on Mar. 15 2010 at 3:34 pm
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I like your poem just you might want to fix heel to heal and just little typos like that. Besides, that I like it!
Just.A.Dream SILVER said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 5:17 pm
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I like the poem, all you need to do is fix the typos, plus, maybe put it in poetic lines, & it would be perfect. :)