Fate.. | Teen Ink


February 15, 2010
By nicdal85 SILVER, Charlotte, North Carolina
nicdal85 SILVER, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Be kind to everyone you meet, because you never know what people are going through"
-im not sure, i'll find out=)

Fate is the one thing no one really knows about
It can be the greatest to ever come into existents’,
Or nothing but a bunch if smoke and mirrors.

On one hand
It seems as things
On this planet that we are lucky
Enough to call home,
Happen for a reason
As if this mysterious fate has already decided the out come
And your just another line
Another stroke of paint on this amazing masterpiece of life

On the other hand this funny thing called fate
Is directed, so it really doesn’t look like
Anything but a motion of your own will
A split second decision
A leap of faith conjoined with hopefulness
That you control what happens,
And anything else is just pure coincident

One way or the other
I believe it’s there
Fate acting as a guardian angel,
Showing us the multitude of paths
Laid before us
Stepping stones towards the choices
To be made.

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This article has 4 comments.

Milo! said...
on Mar. 10 2010 at 4:06 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.

on Feb. 18 2010 at 7:09 pm
CABhahahahaHPhahahaTLhaha GOLD, Kamuela, Hawaii
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wow, awesome writing.

on Feb. 16 2010 at 9:04 pm
CarlyDudek PLATINUM, Ft. Wayne, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Love is when your heart stop beating because of the electric shock you get from a simple smile. Love is no consequences, love is not caring what people think, love is feeling alive and living for him/her, love is when you kno your complete

wow this is really good! true meaning and well written, i love it!

on Feb. 15 2010 at 7:54 pm
Sweatheart SILVER, BPT, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
I can do anything

Amazing poem and I agree with you fate does exist keep on writing