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all a lie

February 5, 2010
By R.S.RICKS GOLD, Rokdale, Georgia
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R.S.RICKS GOLD, Rokdale, Georgia
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death and life the same but in diffrent forms so why try to change something you have no control over.

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Everything that you told
me was nothing but I lie.

you told me that you loved
me but then you killed me.

you told me that you'd always be
there for me but now I'm dead.

you have no tears though you
all the time they were all fake.

everything that you ever said was
nothing but a lie; it was all a lie.

© Lauren T., Hopkinton, MA

The author's comments:
hate ppl who lie about haw they fell. about love, life everything. i belive that if you have to lie to NOT hurt someone then they don't need to here it lieing only shows how week you are to the world.
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byebye said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:03 pm
byebye, Nevermore, Other
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i'm sorry but this is just a little TOO dark for me...
R.S.RICKS GOLD said...
on Apr. 2 2010 at 8:23 am
R.S.RICKS GOLD, Rokdale, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
death and life the same but in diffrent forms so why try to change something you have no control over.

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think you. when someone lies about the love that they fell for you it makes you ready to die.
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 9:04 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
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Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

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i agree with you. and this poem is really good!i love it!