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February 15, 2010
By hollyhottell DIAMOND, Redding, California
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hollyhottell DIAMOND, Redding, California
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poetry is a diary written out loud

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if i make a mistake
you say you will go
i thought our love was more than that
now i dont know
they all left like that
i was left all alone
but nobodys perfect
and through me that is shown
i hold on to what we have
it is all that ive got
is it really that easy to leave
i feel like my heart has been shot
those are more than just words
because they happen all the time
why does everybody leave
a reason i cant find
they all promis to stay
but end up leaving in a hurry
am i destind to be broken
or just destind to be lonely

© Christine S., Arlington, VA

The author's comments:
i am in foster care everybody that i love ends up leaving me. no matter how good i am or how much i show my love nobody stays. even my family......and i though those were the few people that were supposed to love you forever uncondisinaly. i got in a fight with my boyfreins and he said some stuff that made me think of all the people that left me, i was afraid he wanted to leave me to
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