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Thinking of You

April 10, 2010
By RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
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RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
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"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

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Paramore buzzing in my ears
Just laying there in bed
All my thoughts and fears
Filling my mind with dread.

"Maybe if my heart stops beating,
It won't hurt this much."
Maybe then I'll stop needing
And wanting you so much.

I don't want to let you go
But with you so far away
Maybe you shouldn't know
Just exactly what I want to say.

As I'm lying in my bed
Quietly awaiting sleep
Music filling up my head
I realize I shouldn't have fallen so deep.

© Megan M., Ashville, OH

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RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD said...
on Aug. 9 2010 at 4:35 pm
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

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Lol, thanks. Sure, I'll check it out.
Alcanno DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 7 2010 at 1:01 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

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Love this - I couldn't relate anymore unless I was actually you! Could you check out my poem Valentines Day? I'd really appreciate it! Thanks and keep writing!
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 21 2010 at 4:40 pm
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM, Union, Missouri
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awwwww i liked this one a lot.....very good work.......
PenInHand GOLD said...
on Jul. 21 2010 at 10:54 am
PenInHand GOLD, Fayetteville, North Carolina
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" Kemps!"

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I really like this! It flows very well. =]
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD said...
on Jul. 17 2010 at 6:35 pm
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

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I really appreciate all of your comments thank you.
Just.A.Dream SILVER said...
on Jul. 15 2010 at 4:19 pm
Just.A.Dream SILVER, Lake Geneva, Wisconsin
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Part of the J7X team. :)

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Very deep and meaningful. I see a lot of poems with a rhyme scheme like this and it sounds really weird, but the rhyme scheme worked for this one. :)
ReadWriteBreathe PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 13 2010 at 10:09 pm
ReadWriteBreathe PLATINUM, Pocatello, Idaho
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This is a great poem. I love it. It's sad but beautiful.
SarClark BRONZE said...
on Jun. 25 2010 at 6:26 pm
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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I love this, Jess. Especially the Paramore part, because I do that too :)

Really really nice job.

Serendipity_Pen GOLD said...
on Jun. 21 2010 at 1:15 pm
Serendipity_Pen GOLD, Shakopee, Minnesota
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Wow. Thats a really good poem. I wish I could write like that.
real_as_can_be101 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 12:37 pm
real_as_can_be101 PLATINUM, Mustang, Oklahoma
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You can love and hate, but which is more irrate? -unknown

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Amazing!!!!! love it!
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 12:27 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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By Me:)

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You are a very good writer. Your poems are deep and I like your style:)
Swiwi17 SILVER said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 12:20 pm
Swiwi17 SILVER, Glasscity, Nevada
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This is well written. It tells a story, and it tells is simply. Im my opinion that's the best way. It's the other end of the scale without using too much detail and description, but still being quality poetry at the same time. (: I like it a lott
once_a_redhead SILVER said...
on May. 29 2010 at 6:59 am
once_a_redhead SILVER, Lady Lake, Florida
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this is put together nicely and is deep! obviously its personal im sorry for every and naything you have went throuhg just know i have felt your pain
JustAlice. SILVER said...
on May. 9 2010 at 7:34 pm
JustAlice. SILVER, Wesley Chapel, Florida
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"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." Moulin Rouge

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i remember reading this. i like it. i dont remember if i had told you that. 
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on May. 8 2010 at 2:24 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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whoa this is a great poem. it flows very nicely, its awesomeee
-Kal- GOLD said...
on May. 7 2010 at 5:49 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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This was really good Jess. I'm sorry you are hurting so much, I wish things were better for you... I love you