Thank you so much; I really appreciate it :) I was trying to make the structure almost parallel the meaning in a way by starting off slow and sad and finishing off strong because in those types of bring-me--down-situations, it is key to remain strong. Thanks again for taking the time to read (:

  Preferences § 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 - = Backspace   Tab q w e r t y u i o p [ ]   Return     capslock a s d f g h j k l ; ' \   shift ` z x c v b n m , . / shift     English     Deutsch   Español   Français   Italiano   Português   Русский   alt alt     Preferences I love this! So very, very powerful! My favorite is the ending "But, please- with all the damage and scars you have engrained in me, I think you deserve to take a bow. But remember to open up the curtains so everyone can see, just the kind of cold monster that you aren't afraid to show me." This is an absolutely wonderful piece! Keep up the great work!

Thank you ! I'm glad you like it :)

that is one of the most amazing poems i've read... it shoes kind of a sweet innocence mixed with a strong oppinion without making you sound needy...  i really enjoyed it