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Melissa

June 24, 2011
By Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 457 comments

Miraculously
examining the world through
layers of
intense
stigma;
surely it’s
alright.

............

The author's comments:
I have a friend named Melissa, but this isn't really about her. The periods are there because it has to be 100 characters...

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on Aug. 4 2011 at 12:48 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
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Thank you!

on Aug. 4 2011 at 12:47 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 457 comments
Thank you!

on Aug. 3 2011 at 11:52 pm
corallee DIAMOND, Newport Coast, California
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Usually acrostic poems are very, sorry to say, boring, "halloween" acrostics, and especially name acrostics. However, this was absolutely insane. I loved it--it had a very nice flow, and I feel like I know your friend through just those few lines. 

on Aug. 2 2011 at 7:07 pm
callmebaddog SILVER, Spokane, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever. Live as if you'll die today.
-James Dean

Very thoughtful!

on Aug. 2 2011 at 12:28 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 457 comments
It's the minimum.

Eirias SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2011 at 12:09 pm
Eirias SILVER, Spring, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"If you wish to be a writer, write" -Epictetus

Did you want it to be EXACTLY 100 characters, or is there like a 100 character minimum?

on Aug. 1 2011 at 12:50 am
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 457 comments
Yep! This is it!

on Aug. 1 2011 at 12:48 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
41 articles 0 photos 650 comments

Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

Is it this? You rant about 100 characters minimum for this poem, right? Anyway, kudos to you. :)

on Jul. 21 2011 at 5:05 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

Hey, that's neat that it's only 100 characters!

on Jul. 8 2011 at 6:30 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 457 comments
Thanks! :)

austenite GOLD said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 12:44 pm
austenite GOLD, River Falls, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
...one word from you will silence me forever. If, however, your feelings have changed, I will have to tell you: you have bewitched me, body and soul, and I love....I love...I love you. I never wish to be parted from you from this day on. -Mr. Darcy

Wow....100 characters long and it worked! Good job :)