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(Your) EYES

December 22, 2011
By izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
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You all laugh because I&#039;m different,<br /> I laugh because you&#039;re all the same.<br /> - Anonymous

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I don’t remember ever staring into your
Eyes.
And I don’t remember the feeling of the whole me about to soar
Above those greenish skies.

The author's comments:
It wouldn't normally have the (Your) in the title, but it said:
Please enter a longer title (at least 5 characters in length). so now, on teenink, it is (Your) EYES.
{When when in the original poem: it would be just plain ol' EYES...). ENJOY.
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Acastillo GOLD said...
on Apr. 22 2012 at 11:55 am
Acastillo GOLD, Phoenix, Arizona
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Awe so cute and sweet! I loved it lots! Keep writing!
Studio_Riet GOLD said...
on Dec. 29 2011 at 2:25 pm
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&quot; Times you see, is a little arrangement that man has made for himself to try to measure the immeasurable mysteries of life.&quot; -Calypso to Ulysses (Bernard Evslin.)<br /> &quot;You don&#039;t have a soul, you are a soul. You have a body&quot; - CS Lewis

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So short, so sweet. I love it!
izyfizy GOLD said...
on Dec. 25 2011 at 8:08 pm
izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
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THANKS! so much!
BeingAnna GOLD said...
on Dec. 25 2011 at 8:01 pm
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Wow that was lovely !