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What if the rain is simply teardrops?

August 25, 2012
By LittleLadybird GOLD, Carrickfergus, Other
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LittleLadybird GOLD, Carrickfergus, Other
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To be nobody but yourself in a world that is trying it's hardest every night and day to change you into everyone else is to fight the hardest battle a human being can fight, and never stop fighting.

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The stars hang above us
Watching all of our actions
Our words
Our fights.
They see us hurt each other and make our friends cry.
They see us judge each other as we question why.
How can our struggles not move them?
How can our sorrow not make them cry?

What if the rain is simply teardrops
Created by the sadness of the stars?
What if the wind is their sighs
As they look at us from afar?
What if lightening is anger-
The stars lashing out in rage?
Their emotions have poured out for centuries
As they live from age to age.

© Allison H., Vancouver, WA

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LittleLadybird GOLD said...
on Jun. 4 2013 at 6:09 pm
LittleLadybird GOLD, Carrickfergus, Other
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To be nobody but yourself in a world that is trying it's hardest every night and day to change you into everyone else is to fight the hardest battle a human being can fight, and never stop fighting.

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That means so much, thank you!!! :D
Jade.I.Am ELITE said...
on Jun. 4 2013 at 5:31 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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Very original and beautiful, you have a way of conveying your message with such amazing imagery, its a little like my style. I love this!
LittleLadybird GOLD said...
on Jun. 3 2013 at 3:15 am
LittleLadybird GOLD, Carrickfergus, Other
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To be nobody but yourself in a world that is trying it's hardest every night and day to change you into everyone else is to fight the hardest battle a human being can fight, and never stop fighting.

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Aww thank you!! :)
emmagm BRONZE said...
on Jun. 2 2013 at 10:07 am
emmagm BRONZE, Montclair, New Jersey
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I love this! Such a lovely melancholy idea and the writing is great too :) Nice work!