Dreamland | Teen Ink


November 10, 2012
By GretaGibson PLATINUM, Vancouver, Other
GretaGibson PLATINUM, Vancouver, Other
23 articles 4 photos 23 comments

Who says I’ll fall asleep
Maybe I’ll fall awake
Maybe the dream world’s the real world
And it’s all a big mistake
And when I’m wandering where I don’t know
Who’s to say I’m really lost?
My aim’s to wander aimlessly
Through early winter’s frost
I’ll let you into my frozen world
Lace your fingers round my hand
And perhaps we’ll turn a world of snowflakes
Into a summerland

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This article has 4 comments.

taylormac75 said...
on Nov. 15 2012 at 8:57 pm
i absolutley love this poem! I love anything that has to deal with a dream or some far off dreamland. Like suckerpunch or The Lovely Bones.

on Nov. 14 2012 at 10:25 am
amazing job.I felt like I was in your dreamland

on Nov. 14 2012 at 10:24 am
amazing job. I felt like I was there in your dreamland.

escapegoat said...
on Nov. 14 2012 at 2:17 am
really good poem :) I also have those thoughts sometimes... can you read my work too? its not as good as yours but pls read it :)) TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/500933/This-is-a-call/?page=1