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Should I stop trying to contact you?

December 22, 2012
By CassieRaye GOLD, Springfield, Missouri
CassieRaye GOLD, Springfield, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Some may say I'm a dreamer, but I'm not the only one.


Hey
Anybody out there?
I've wished on
every star
every 11:11
every prayer
I've
knocked on wood
crossed my fingers
I
said my prayers
went to church
said sorry
Where are you?
And why aren't you here?
And why
And why
And hello?
Can you hear me?



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OldYoungOne said...
on May. 25 2013 at 12:56 am
Are you tlkn of love or god?

on Jan. 4 2013 at 1:24 pm
Sparkle1pops PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"No great artist ever sees things as they really are. If he did, he would cease to be an artist."
- Oscar Wilde

I think this is one of my favorite poems ever! The only thing I woul change would be when you said, "and why and why and hello". It would be coolif you switched that to, " and why and where ,hello?" Also you metioned prayers tice youmight only want to mention that once.