Aww thanks! I'm not as sweet as you may think but I just had to let you know that poetry, no matter who writes it and its over all quality, is always a beautiful language few people understand :)

oh my gosh, you are so sweet! thank you for your feedback, it is extremely helpful!

This is a very very nice poem. :). My favorite lines (that I will remember for a long time) are "...Pomegranates hold iridescent pearls like secrets..." . The alliteration in this line is playful, mysterious and uplifting. "I'm a summer garden,green with envy.". I had to think this line through when I read it, gardens didn't seem envious, but then I realized I can't even picture a summer garden. This led me to also realize when a garden is portrayed in most anything it is either the flourishing spring garden or it's the waning garden in the fall. Summer is so overlooked. I don't think this line has been given enough credit by readers. It's so subtle you can skim right over it, like a garden in the summer. But if you look closer, dig a little deeper, you find a life you never knew was there. Alrighty, I ramble and apologize but this poem was marvelous and I had to prove to you that your poetry talent is blooming brilliantly and you just have to learn to love it yourself before you let other people's opinions in the way. I feel priviliged to have read this and encourage further :) <3. I once again apologize for my rambling :P.