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Army of one

October 20, 2014
By the_truth_about_me SILVER, Cambridge, Massachusetts
the_truth_about_me SILVER, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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I am fighting in an army of one
I keep going
I keep my head strait
chin up
shoulders back
Chest forward
I keep marching
I am in an army of one
I do not choose how I feel
When I smile
When I laugh
I just keep marching
Strait ahead
I do not get choose how to act
I don't step out of line
I don't stray from my place
I keep marching
Head strait
Chin up
Shoulders Back
Chest forward
I keep fighting
In my army of one


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dya.o PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 13 2014 at 10:39 am
dya.o PLATINUM, Milton, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
“If consensus is overrated, I think balance is, too.
I have no interest in living a balanced life.
I want a life of adventure.” | Chris Guillebeau

I like this. You did very well in writing it. In the first two or so lines it feels a little awkward to read, but other than that I enjoyed this. Good job.

on Oct. 31 2014 at 8:31 pm
No-one-knows-me.. PLATINUM, Rockford, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
To be or not to be That is the question.
-Shakespeare

Very interesting, I think it brings up how the people around you will always try to control you and how governments never truly give us freedom. 5/5 awesome.

on Oct. 27 2014 at 8:58 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
Khalil Gibran

I like it, but it seems to lack the intense emotion of your other pieces, keep writing though1