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December 17, 2008
By AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
We choose the love we think we deserve ~The Perks


And I remember she wouldn’t wake up.
Her lips were mushed together in a
Horrible shade of red
They buried my mother in a white dress
And red lips.
And she couldn’t see.
Where are your glasses, Mommy?
And still at sixteen I bring them to my face
And peer through the distorted murky lenses
To see what she saw
Maybe one day …
And I remember it hitting me
Like it does every day
When I hear them all talk and complain about their
“Horrible” mothers
What’s it like to have a mother
I’d give anything to know,
Or at least for them to know how lucky they are.
They know.
And I remember she wouldn’t sit up
And I dreamed of a stuffing machine because
Someone whispered by my ear she was
Cut in half and stuffed
And it made no sense
And still at sixteen I wonder
What happened to my mother?
And I remember her faintly
She doesn’t even smile in my dreams anymore
And I wonder if she’ll ever be proud of me
If she’d ever approve of me
And who I’ve become
The things I’ve seen
The things I’ve done
And I remember her singing
Though I can’t hear her voice
The only happy Christmas I hold on to
Every year
Maybe one day it’ll come back
I used to think
Maybe one day she’d come back
And still at sixteen I hope
Maybe one day she’ll come back …
And I remember she wouldn’t wake up
Not even to say good-bye.



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on Jul. 22 2011 at 1:20 pm
AmateurArtist BRONZE, Newport Beach, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;And your very flesh shall be a great poem&quot;<br /> Walt Whitman

"And I wonder if she’ll ever be proud of me
If she’d ever approve of me
And who I’ve become
The things I’ve seen
The things I’ve done"

Those lines are very powerful.

Good job!


on Jul. 21 2011 at 6:13 pm
Ashley Mason BRONZE, Sturbridge, Massachusetts
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beautiful, is this true to you?

on Jul. 21 2011 at 6:00 pm
LunaIsNotHere BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I admire the concept of selling your soul for the sake of an unforgettable performance&quot;

I can't really relate to this story because my mother hasn't died but it still moved me and made me feel bad for the person who was experiencing this.

on Jul. 20 2011 at 10:52 am
Newyorkcity_Dreamer PLATINUM, Wausau, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Music was my refuge. I could crawl into the space between the notes and curl my back to loneliness&rdquo;<br /> Maya Angelou<br /> <br /> &ldquo;Words make you think a thought. Music makes you feel a feeling. A song makes you feel a thought.&rdquo;<br /> E.Y. Harburg

Omg this is amazing and it touched me

 


kat2.0 SILVER said...
on Jul. 16 2011 at 7:07 pm
kat2.0 SILVER, Sparrowbush, New York
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Favorite Quote:
life is short so go for it

This is amazing and moving and I'm at a lost for words of what else I could say

on Jul. 16 2011 at 3:52 pm
Laura_Oliver GOLD, Manchester, Connecticut
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I'm praying this isn't based on experience, but it seems so personal. If not, you have the world's greatest POV skills.

Either way, this poem is moving and really outstanding, so please leave some feedback on my poem "True Colors" if you get a chance (when you aren't answering fan mail!!!) (^_^)


on Jul. 13 2011 at 9:03 pm
CountryGirl31297 SILVER, Newnan, Georgia
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Wow...this is amazing!! I love it! :D

on Jul. 13 2011 at 1:21 pm
TheDuchess GOLD, Johannesburg, Other
12 articles 2 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Who are you?&quot; - Lewis Carroll, Alice&#039;s Adventures in Wonderland, Chapter 5<br /> <br /> &quot;And nothing &#039;gainst Time&#039;s scythe can make defence<br /> Save breed, to brave him when he takes thee hence.&quot;<br /> -William Shakespeare,When I Do Count The Clock That Tells The Time

heartfelt and beautiful. i can feel it

on Jul. 13 2011 at 12:32 pm
AmberElisabeth GOLD, Pearcy, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
I have a lot of favorite quotes, so I couldn&#039;t possibly just pick one.(:

This is a beautiful poem. I like to write poems too. I haven't posted any here yet because I'm working on my book. This is beautiful though. Thank you for sharing your feelings in such a breath taking way(:

on Jul. 13 2011 at 11:10 am
ohheyyyelli SILVER, Woonsocket, Rhode Island
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This is beutiful. One of the best poems I've ever read, I got chills.

HannaBella said...
on Jul. 13 2011 at 2:26 am
HannaBella, Beverly Hills, California
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Oh my god, this poem is amazing! You really managed to depict what you feel in such a beautiful way. I feel like your poem really hit home since my feelings are almost mutual.

on Jul. 13 2011 at 1:11 am
AFreeSpirit97 GOLD, Dallas, Oregon
11 articles 2 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;He who does not understand your silence will probably not understand your words.&quot; -Elbert Hubbard

Beautiful. A peice of art in words. A lot of emotions are hidden, but they come out as you "read inbetween the lines."

on Jul. 12 2011 at 2:01 am
TintedWindows GOLD, Kingwood, Texas
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This is gorgeous. I really liked it. :]

PrincessJ said...
on Jul. 10 2011 at 3:16 am
PrincessJ, Portland, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.&quot; ~ Eleanor Roosevelt

Thats really beautiful. Its amazing how much emotion you put into every word and every line, I am sure your mother would be proud.

on Jul. 3 2011 at 9:01 pm
EvaDushaneSullivan GOLD, Medina, Minnesota
11 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Salvador Dali<br /> \&quot;Do not fear mistakes - there are none\&quot;

this gave me chills. wow. you're an amazing writer, really

IamRevy BRONZE said...
on Jul. 3 2011 at 9:55 am
IamRevy BRONZE, State Of Mind, Other
4 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Trying to please the world is a self-made curse&quot;

Thousands of applauds i would confer to this piece if i had such hands at my reach, no matter the words i use you just won't understand the depth and love i have for this piece..every line poured out with grave sentimental conviction. AMAZING

kylie said...
on Jun. 23 2011 at 4:05 pm
beautiful... :,(

on Jun. 23 2011 at 12:27 am
Dragonfly_Girl PLATINUM, Pleasant Hill, California
21 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not waiting for the storm to pass, but learning to dance in the rain.

This is very moving and beautiful- made me cry. All I can say is I am sure your mother is proud of you, wherever she is. This poem reached out to me. Thank you!

inkers GOLD said...
on Jun. 21 2011 at 11:15 pm
inkers GOLD, Midland, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;And the lamplight gloating o&#039;er him threw his shadow on the floor... and my soul from out that shadow... shall be lifted, nevermore!&quot; - Poe

This was very powerful. I loved it.
I will say that every time you wrote "And I remember..." it felt like it should have been a new stanza.
But even so, this was so ridiculously good. You portrayed your emotion successfully.

on Jun. 21 2011 at 1:52 pm
tatertot1311 BRONZE, Johnson, Vermont
4 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Dance like no one is watching you&quot;

This is such a beautiful poem filled with so much emotion. Especially since many people can relate to the story. Wonderful job!