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Dear Mommy

August 5, 2011
By JTboiiDrama PLATINUM, Chicago, Illinois
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It is what it is

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I loved the way you tickled my feet and read to me till' I fell asleep. You kissed my head and made my bed and made sure I was all ways well fed. You gave me advice, made sure I was nice and when I was wrong you made me think twice. You all ways would try and you never did lie but some way some how I never did say goodbye.

© Wajida S., Shrewsbury, MA

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It hurts because it's the truth but I learn to go on in life. I know that i will have my chance to say goodbye properly.
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thetruthawaits94 SILVER said...
on Aug. 21 2011 at 1:06 pm
thetruthawaits94 SILVER, Duncan, Oklahoma
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Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, but learning to dance in the rain.

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this has great feeling in it! I think you did a wonderful job! :) may i ask, why do you format all of your poems in this way (like in a paragraph)?
JerseyGirl716 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 21 2011 at 11:04 am
JerseyGirl716 BRONZE, Central, New Jersey
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&quot;We gain strength, and courage, and confidence by each experience in which we really stop to look fear in the face... we must do that which we think we cannot.&quot; -Eleanor Roosevelt

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I can feel your pain in your words; great job!
lissa_ GOLD said...
on Aug. 14 2011 at 8:28 pm
lissa_ GOLD, Salt Lake City, Utah
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&quot;If you don&#039;t stand for something you&#039;ll fall for anything.&quot;- Suckerpunch<br /> &quot;The purpose of life is to be a better version of yourself.&quot;- Lucy Hale

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good job conveying emotion)= 
kaykaybeck PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 12 2011 at 5:35 pm
kaykaybeck PLATINUM, Petersburg, Michigan
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Life takes you somewhere, love helps you get there.

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Aww :( really good job