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You & Me

October 8, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

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You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.

© Stephanie F., Garnerville, NY

The author's comments:
Isn't it so sad when you see an old friend and their whole personality and outlook on life has changed...and not for the good. Well that's what inspired me for this poem...I hope you enjoyed it
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bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 2 2010 at 4:39 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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thank u!!!! I'll def read it n comment!
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 5:11 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

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dude i love it!!

 

VampChick49 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 10:59 am
VampChick49 BRONZE, Tomball, Texas
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OMG I love it.
elfiewrites BRONZE said...
on Mar. 31 2010 at 8:02 pm
elfiewrites BRONZE, Hillsdale, New Jersey
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"The seat of knowledge is in the head, of wisdom, in the heart."~William Hazlitt
"Be yourself, everyone else is taken."

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I love this, and totally agree with it! Keep on writing! If you get the chance, may you PLEASE comment on my work, too? Thanks so much
JustWriting BRONZE said...
on Mar. 30 2010 at 5:53 pm
JustWriting BRONZE, Sao Paulo, Other
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I love your work! It's like the third time i read this! I would really like it if you gave your opinion in a chapter i posted here ^^
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 12:25 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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thank u again!

lol i kinda wish it was longer too lol
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 12:23 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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SWEET!

I can't wait to read it!
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 12:23 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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Thanx;) all of my poems r pretty simple but that have a lot of meaning and emotion behind them:)
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 12:22 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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Well actually thanx:)

lol
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 12:22 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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Thank u so much:)

n i'm sry about ur friend

i hope only the best for the future!
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 12:21 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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Thank u:)

I rly try to make my poems as relatable as possible
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 12:21 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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thank you:)

Oh yes the heart breaks of summer
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 12:20 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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Thank you so much!

That is my favorite thing about this poem is that i can relate to many different situations and I didn't even mean to do that when I first wrote it but I guess that's just the magic of poetry!
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 12:18 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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Thank u so much:)

I'm sure u have great talent too!
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 12:17 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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I'm glad:)

Yeppers I'll def take a look:)
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 12:16 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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Thanx:)

Ya sadly it happens too often...
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 12:15 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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Thank u thank u:):)

Yes ofcoarse i"ll def check out ur stuff!
justbe-3 said...
on Mar. 20 2010 at 6:07 pm
justbe-3, Hollis, New Hampshire
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"You live but once, you might as well be amusing." -Coco Chanel
"Here is the test to find whether your mission on Earth is finished: if you're alive, it isn't." -Richard Bach
"Gravitation is not responsible for people falling in love." -Einstein

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i love it! i wish it was longer though. your a great author.
pieluver BRONZE said...
on Mar. 20 2010 at 11:23 am
pieluver BRONZE, Blountsville, Alabama
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"The silence isn't so bad till I look at my hand and feel sad cause the spaces between my fingers are were urs fit perfectly."

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Okay so I submitted my poem it is called summer girl. Hope u like it.
zack1069 GOLD said...
on Mar. 12 2010 at 11:30 pm
zack1069 GOLD, Loveland, Ohio
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i like it its really simple but good