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October 15, 2009
By LiveItUp GOLD, Congers, New York
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So how can things once shared end here today?
I never thought the two of us would end.
A love once true now has been thrown away,
And now I’ll hide and simply just pretend,
These tears are only allergies! You see,
I promised that I’d never cry again.
Now once again we are stuck and can’t agree.
All fights like this for us are now mundane.
I start to question if we still belong.
The same old problem tearing us apart.
I always ask myself where things went wrong
Something foolishly ignored from the start.
You said you’d never leave and now you’ve gone.
Nothing to do but dream of days foregone.

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All I can say is that I'm sorry.
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LiveItUp GOLD said...
on Mar. 15 2010 at 2:37 pm
LiveItUp GOLD, Congers, New York
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thanks a lot. :) i certainly will.
Milo! said...
on Mar. 14 2010 at 6:26 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.