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April 15, 2012
By somerandomperson GOLD, Millstadt, Illinois
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To love is to destroy to be loved is to be destroyed~jace wayland<br /> forever alone

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Go ahead judge me
In the end it wont matter
So just let me be
Or my heart you'll shatter
You'll always be wrong
Because MY mind is MY creation
My imagination goes long
My mind is its own nation
MY MIND IS MINE
So don't waist our time

© Michael H., Milford, CT

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I thought of this after someone criticized me. I know sonnets usually have 10 syllables but o well. comment so i can improve!
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SecretFlame PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 19 2013 at 10:01 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
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&quot;I have a life. I just choose to ignore it.&quot;<br /> -one of my friends

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This was a great way to put it in perspective! Great job and keep it up. It was short and blazing with fire :)
Songs_Along GOLD said...
on Jul. 16 2012 at 3:59 am
Songs_Along GOLD, Abcd, Other
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&quot;Sometimes we are only given a few minutes to be with the one we love and a thousand hours to spend just thinking about them.&quot;

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MY MIND IS ITS OWN NATION-my favourite lines...short and simple yet thrilling...luv it :)
AyeshaLiveLaughLove BRONZE said...
on Jul. 11 2012 at 12:12 am
AyeshaLiveLaughLove BRONZE, Overland Park, Kansas
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&quot;Dream as if you&#039;ll live forever, live as if you&#039;ll die today.&quot;<br /> -James Dean

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Wow! What a great way to put it! Nice work(:
DanielM SILVER said...
on Jul. 10 2012 at 1:50 am
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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&quot;I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn&#039;t do.&quot; - Daniel Moto<br /> &quot; I&#039;ve sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?&quot;- Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &quot;People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person.&quot;-Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &ldquo;Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?&rdquo; &ndash; Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &ldquo;If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.&rdquo; &ndash; B. Reith

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Wow this is a really good poem. Great job and great message. I really like this poem it shows how being you is the best. Suggestions: maybe extend more on this whole you and my part.
somerandomperson GOLD said...
on Jun. 9 2012 at 9:49 pm
somerandomperson GOLD, Millstadt, Illinois
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To love is to destroy to be loved is to be destroyed~jace wayland<br /> forever alone

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 i dont like puncuation unless i truly must
somerandomperson GOLD said...
on Jun. 9 2012 at 9:49 pm
somerandomperson GOLD, Millstadt, Illinois
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To love is to destroy to be loved is to be destroyed~jace wayland<br /> forever alone

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 i dont like puncuation unless i truly must
somerandomperson GOLD said...
on Jun. 9 2012 at 6:52 pm
somerandomperson GOLD, Millstadt, Illinois
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To love is to destroy to be loved is to be destroyed~jace wayland<br /> forever alone

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because i wrote it  as not yelling but as calmly explaining the ovious
TheDarkSideOfTheMoon SILVER said...
on Jun. 9 2012 at 4:57 pm
TheDarkSideOfTheMoon SILVER, Cincinnati, Ohio
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I would put a 5/5 star, but first I needed to know...why no punctuations? Otherwise, I like it.
Saphy said...
on Apr. 19 2012 at 10:23 pm
Saphy, Hollywood, California
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Never forget to smile.

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I love how you used the word MY. It was really good!
somerandomperson GOLD said...
on Apr. 19 2012 at 10:08 pm
somerandomperson GOLD, Millstadt, Illinois
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To love is to destroy to be loved is to be destroyed~jace wayland<br /> forever alone

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Thank you!
hippiechick99 GOLD said...
on Apr. 19 2012 at 3:11 pm
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I rated this poem 5/5 stars. I think this is a great image of not confoming to the world's mold. LOVED IT<3