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Vista of Moonlit Night

January 3, 2013
By Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

After every interval of a fortnight,
The queen of night comes to address,
To preach love and cascade light,
The mysterious charisma; the white dress!

As the moonlight embraces everything,
The stars blush and put on veils.
Silently, the lake keeps on smiling,
With breeze, the perfume of night sails.

The nightingale, in praise of moon,
Begins chanting a soothing song,
The charming vista is a boon,
Surely, to nirvana, it belongs.

As the bright moonlit night leaves, the craving hearts say,
"Forever-long, wish the aura would stay this way."

The author's comments:
I feel like I have fallen in love with moonlit night. The inspiration is obvious from the poem's title. I've composed it to inspire other hearts which are unaware of night's beauty - the bewitching beauty of the moonlit night!

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on Feb. 14 2013 at 3:12 pm
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Amazing Ham!! I absolutely LOVE this poem so perfectly made and scripted. I would love to read more. This is beautiful! :)

on Feb. 14 2013 at 12:02 pm
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
11 articles 0 photos 115 comments

Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

It doesn't even have to be night for me to picture what you just described. It's absolutely beautiful. :) I can really see it in my head and I can see why you are in love with the moonlit night. I'm in love with your work. :)

on Feb. 10 2013 at 1:28 pm
Sparkle1pops PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
31 articles 20 photos 342 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No great artist ever sees things as they really are. If he did, he would cease to be an artist."
- Oscar Wilde

I really like how you were comparing the night to a bride, that was a wondrful metaphor. 

Hourglass said...
on Feb. 4 2013 at 12:03 pm
Hourglass, Hydrabad, Other
0 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things that you didn't do than by the ones you did do. So throw off the bowlines. Sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore. Dream. Discover.” (K
― H. Ja...

Its awesome Wonderfully writtern  Its very well versed and meaningful makes you wanna feel all the words as your own 

Hourglass said...
on Feb. 4 2013 at 11:57 am
Wow Its wonderful. Beautifully written , Your expressions are very well versed 

on Jan. 30 2013 at 11:05 pm
EnnaGirl SILVER, Sacramento, California
9 articles 2 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be the change you want to see in the world
- Ghandi

This is really good ham! my favorite definitly! keep up the good work

on Jan. 30 2013 at 11:05 pm
Daryl-ism_Black_Apollyon SILVER, Carson, California
5 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We may have all come on different ships, but we're in the same boat now."
- Martin Luther King, Jr.

Just brilliant, as a gothic poet enthusiast, I completely understand your love for the moonlit night and seeing it as beautiful instead of dark and evil like most people.

Tenikae said...
on Jan. 28 2013 at 8:44 am
Tenikae, Accra, Virginia
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
You never know how strong you are until being strong is your only choice- unknown quote

absolutely brilliant! keep going strong k? :)

on Jan. 27 2013 at 10:59 am
dancing.inthe.rain GOLD, Bowling Green, Kentucky
15 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We all fear death and question our place in the universe. The artist's job is not to subcome to dispair, but to find an antidote for the emptiness of existance." -Gertrude Stein in the movie Midnight In Paris.

I love it! I already have an obsession with the moon and I think you described it beautifully. I like your style and can't wait to read your other work :)

on Jan. 23 2013 at 11:20 pm
TheHerbArtist SILVER, Paradise, California
6 articles 0 photos 25 comments
I can connect with the way you describe moonlight. There is nothing like a full moon and the glow is assends upon the world. Your adjectives are truley beautiful and your sense of imagry is amazing. Thank you for sharing your work (:

on Jan. 23 2013 at 12:08 pm
_SlenderMandy_ GOLD, St. Johns, Michigan
13 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm entirely bonkers. But I'll tell you what. All the best people are." - Tim Burton

this is amazing! i love the imagery you put in there, keep it up muh freand!!!

sunshine said...
on Jan. 22 2013 at 5:46 am
great poem

on Jan. 21 2013 at 11:57 am
LinkinPark12 PLATINUM, Lincolnshire, Other
45 articles 1 photo 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
Work like you don’t need money, love like you've never been hurt, and dance like no one's watching. ¦ I like change - but only when everything stays the same.

....And then the sun comes up and swallows them whole. On a more serious note, the poem is really good, it made me feel peaceful and I swear I could hear the nightingale... ;)

on Jan. 20 2013 at 11:02 pm
WhiteSwan13 SILVER, Hawera, Other
8 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing is Impossible & We Live and Learn

Nice Poem!

on Jan. 20 2013 at 11:00 pm
BeccaRodwell BRONZE, Lake Delton, Wisconsin
4 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you wish to see in the world"

WOW! :)

on Jan. 20 2013 at 10:35 pm
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
12 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
“A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left.”
-Marilyn Monroe

wow, this was absolutely beautiful... I loved it :) you're so much better than me lol

on Jan. 18 2013 at 10:38 am
Sumayah_Arcusa BRONZE, Bowie, Maryland
3 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nice guys finish last.

This poem makes me feel very calm. I feel safe, and unharmed. When I close my eyes, this poem is a life I have imagined of.

on Jan. 16 2013 at 12:19 pm
breona_was_here, Morriston, Florida
0 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
let me love you and I will love you until you learn to love yourself ... please let me love you I know your trouble dont be afraid just let me help ... let me love you and I will love you until you learn to love your self ...

i like this poem a lot ..... it just brings a feeling of love so exotic and natural (very good)

on Jan. 16 2013 at 12:19 pm
mystery_kisses. PLATINUM, Ocala, Florida
33 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Tears are those annoying things that are a dead give away that your scars have grown just alil bit deeper.

This is a really good poem. Keep up the good work!

on Jan. 16 2013 at 12:10 pm
This is a really good poem. Keep it up.(: