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Vista of Moonlit Night

January 3, 2013
By Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

After every interval of a fortnight,
The queen of night comes to address,
To preach love and cascade light,
The mysterious charisma; the white dress!

As the moonlight embraces everything,
The stars blush and put on veils.
Silently, the lake keeps on smiling,
With breeze, the perfume of night sails.

The nightingale, in praise of moon,
Begins chanting a soothing song,
The charming vista is a boon,
Surely, to nirvana, it belongs.

As the bright moonlit night leaves, the craving hearts say,
"Forever-long, wish the aura would stay this way."

The author's comments:
I feel like I have fallen in love with moonlit night. The inspiration is obvious from the poem's title. I've composed it to inspire other hearts which are unaware of night's beauty - the bewitching beauty of the moonlit night!

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Lynn7 SILVER said...
on Jan. 16 2013 at 10:12 am
Lynn7 SILVER, Charlotte, North Carolina
5 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Have confidence in yourself...if you believe they'll believe. -Yuani (me)

I love poems on nature especially the beautiful night sky with stars. I love this!!!!

on Jan. 15 2013 at 10:16 am
Dreamer_ SILVER, Milton On, Other
7 articles 10 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're all mad here" ~ Cheshire Cat

"Whats your dream?"
"To go, away." ~ Surfs Up.

Really good! 

on Jan. 13 2013 at 12:26 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind

amazing and beauitful :)

on Jan. 13 2013 at 11:55 am
Alisaluvzyou. BRONZE, Las Angols, California
1 article 0 photos 5 comments
I love it it soo beatiful  

on Jan. 13 2013 at 8:39 am
MyFinalDestiny GOLD, Central City, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"stay golden" the outsiders

wow thats really amazing

on Jan. 13 2013 at 8:30 am
loveshersheys, Lahore, Other
0 articles 2 photos 30 comments
I love this poem! It's beautiful!

on Jan. 13 2013 at 7:34 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)
"I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right." -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, "The Book Thief"

just beautiful!

on Jan. 13 2013 at 2:54 am
Miss_Brightside GOLD, Defiance, Ohio
16 articles 1 photo 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's like she sees the diamond underneath And she's polishin' you 'til you shine. -Brad Paisley. (this goes to my step mom she keeps me going)
If you want a rainbow you gotta put up with the rain.-Albert Einstein


on Jan. 12 2013 at 12:01 pm
country-cutey GOLD, St.croix Falls, Wisconsin
10 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dont say it if you dont mean it because i might actually belive it

i love it its pretty

on Jan. 12 2013 at 11:46 am
theadventuresofemma GOLD, Ontario, Other
12 articles 2 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others.
For beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness.
And for poise walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.
-Audrey Hepburn

I LOVE your use of personification! It makes it so interesting and insightful! :) <3

. said...
on Jan. 11 2013 at 10:39 pm
wow so pretty and, dare i say it, poetic  

on Jan. 11 2013 at 10:38 pm
MannytheLarry, Glendale, California
0 articles 2 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Move on

This is really good...I feel like I'm in location

on Jan. 11 2013 at 2:12 pm
MonsterGirl2000 SILVER, Des Moines, New Mexico
9 articles 0 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
When it seems like there’s no one left to run to in this empty world you can come to me I’ll be your shooting star. You can tell me your dreams I can’t promise to make them come true, but I’ll be there to pick up the pieces of your broken heart if your dreams happen to fall through…Unknown

verry good!!!!!!!

on Jan. 11 2013 at 11:27 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

Beautifully written :) I love moonlit nights too :) if you're a THG fan, im guessing you'll like this - :) leave a comment if poss :) thankss :)

on Jan. 11 2013 at 11:21 am
JadedHeart GOLD, Somewhere, Georgia
10 articles 0 photos 37 comments
heyy, that was really good. You should consider putting it in the watty awards on wattpad. 

on Jan. 11 2013 at 11:01 am
LyricLove SILVER, Webster City, Iowa
6 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't tell me the skies the limit when there are foot prints on the moon."

I like how you are very creative and really captivating! AAMMMMAAAZZZIIINNNGGGG :)

on Jan. 11 2013 at 10:15 am
L-Dizzle_I_LOVEE_COOKIES BRONZE, A Placee, Virginia
1 article 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Glubington Glubba glubba glubba glubba Glubington, umff, shut your lemmon heads, im bored, darn youuuuu, other person how did the happen me: he's physic now lemme alone lol


Koehler said...
on Jan. 11 2013 at 9:53 am
Koehler, St. Augustine, Florida
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The greatest risk in life is not falling but in rising every time we fall"

Very good you definitly know how to write a poem :) keep going

on Jan. 10 2013 at 10:57 pm
CrowOfRuination PLATINUM, Lawrence, Kansas
38 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
You cannot be lonely if you like the person you're alone with. -Wayne Dyer
Leading those who have followed a greater leader without knowing what it is you are doing is the same as wielding a sword against a master of weapons. -Kreepy

I love the word choice you have there and the description through detail is rather lovely and I quite enjoyed reading it.

on Jan. 10 2013 at 10:57 pm
ScarlettRose390 PLATINUM, Hawthorne, New Jersey
21 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing is impossible, only unbelievable."
"Gotta keep doing it if I want to get better. Gotta stop doing it if I want to ger worse. Gotta do it sometimes if I want to stay the same."

This poem is automatically great because it has the word fornight in it. Seriously though, this is nicely done. :)