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Vista of Moonlit Night

January 3, 2013
By Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

After every interval of a fortnight,
The queen of night comes to address,
To preach love and cascade light,
The mysterious charisma; the white dress!

As the moonlight embraces everything,
The stars blush and put on veils.
Silently, the lake keeps on smiling,
With breeze, the perfume of night sails.

The nightingale, in praise of moon,
Begins chanting a soothing song,
The charming vista is a boon,
Surely, to nirvana, it belongs.

As the bright moonlit night leaves, the craving hearts say,
"Forever-long, wish the aura would stay this way."

The author's comments:
I feel like I have fallen in love with moonlit night. The inspiration is obvious from the poem's title. I've composed it to inspire other hearts which are unaware of night's beauty - the bewitching beauty of the moonlit night!

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on Apr. 4 2013 at 2:19 pm
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
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Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

i luv this one its one of the best :)  

on Apr. 4 2013 at 12:38 am
AmorMoritur PLATINUM, Monroe, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"There is only you and your camera. The limitations in your photography are in yourself, for what we see is what we are." ~Ernst Haas

i love it!! it is achingly sweet...

on Apr. 1 2013 at 3:04 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

this is really good i like your word choice

GreyGirl ELITE said...
on Mar. 31 2013 at 4:43 am
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
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This is beautiful. Wonderful imagry. Very evocative. Keep writing :)

EMarie GOLD said...
on Mar. 31 2013 at 4:41 am
EMarie GOLD, Joplin, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Courage comes in all sizes, but fits only a few.
What is wise is not always right and what is right is not always wise.
Knowing what is wrong and right is not choosing which to fight.
-All of these are by me

This is absolutely lovely! It has a great vocabulary and wow! It is just beautiful!  

ZainabS SILVER said...
on Mar. 30 2013 at 7:08 am
ZainabS SILVER, Karachi, Other
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Wow, thats really observant.

on Mar. 20 2013 at 12:02 pm
DoubttheCircles SILVER, Washougal, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Keep swimming, keep swimming, Heaven is just on the horizon.

I love it! It really captures the peace and beauty of the night. The way you use your wording is extrordinary and powerful. Definitly a favorite (:

necci SILVER said...
on Mar. 20 2013 at 11:59 am
necci SILVER, Denver, Colorado
8 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Women are many things to humans, but the one thing they are not is dominated by men.
-If a single act of hate can do so much damage, what can a single act of kindness do?

very clear and goooved loved it 

on Mar. 19 2013 at 1:15 pm
larissaecm SILVER, Victoria, Other
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i love the the words, and the images the words explain, good job!

on Mar. 19 2013 at 12:15 pm
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

thanks sis

on Mar. 19 2013 at 11:23 am
RagwaFouda BRONZE, Dubai, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
HEY U YA U!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ain't Nobody got time for Dat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Loved It !!!!!

on Mar. 17 2013 at 2:17 pm
monkeymorgan BRONZE, Middlebury, Indiana
2 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fair means that everybody gets what they need and the only way to get what you need is to make that happen yourself." Rick Riordan

Very nice. I love the way you described the scenery. your use of diction was amazing very very good job.

on Mar. 17 2013 at 10:42 am
AlisaLovesYou, Brooklyn, New York
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

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This is really cute and good

Hammad Khan said...
on Mar. 16 2013 at 2:04 pm
Nice one Hamza ..... 

on Feb. 24 2013 at 6:10 am
BloodyMary PLATINUM, N/A, Other
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Favorite Quote:
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My favorite poem of yours! I felt like under the spell of the moonlit night! 

NoeMimi1206 said...
on Feb. 22 2013 at 2:25 pm
NoeMimi1206, Easley, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
“You know you're in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams.”
― Dr. Seuss

i've always loved your poems!

on Feb. 19 2013 at 5:23 am
Sabeen_Yameen SILVER, Karachi, Other
9 articles 10 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you want something you have never had,
You have got to do something, You have never done!

nice one :) the way u use your words is brilliant...

on Feb. 18 2013 at 12:23 pm
LittleStormWriterGG SILVER, Malvern, Iowa
8 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Imagination is more important than knowledge. ~ Albert Einstein
Smile, laugh, love. :)

I think so far, this is my favorite. Its a beautiful reflection of a moonlit night. :)  

on Feb. 17 2013 at 10:53 pm
TheBlueRose BRONZE, Deltona, Florida
4 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
I have a dream...-Martin Luther King Jr.

this poem has grasped both my heart and soul. it amazes me that someone could make simple words sound so beautiful. :) 

on Feb. 15 2013 at 4:38 pm
ZohaBahir BRONZE, Karachi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
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