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The Dawn (My Old Swan)

November 6, 2013
By xG4RY GOLD, East Falmouth, Massachusetts
xG4RY GOLD, East Falmouth, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"The shorter it is, the more well said it is."

Ever so often you're transcendental
My eyes frequently don't believe the sight.
It tends to be some what detrimental;
Ha! The feeling is worth the risky height.

Shinning in my heart as an untamed fire
Heating, fueling my core to maximum,
Exploding me to always get higher;
One day, my Love, I hope you will fathom.

But all that these are, are shots in the dark
For I fear the spell I had is now gone,
Since I see no signs that you hold my mark.
Yet it's always darkest before the dawn.

And I could not ever give up on hope.
I pray each day that I may be your dope.

The author's comments:
This sonnet is super-duper old. But I felt I should put it up here anyway. I hope you like it, please don't judge to harshly, it was written a while ago.

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