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With the Immensity of the Sea

November 3, 2014
By ifeyescouldspeak BRONZE, Louisville, Kentucky
ifeyescouldspeak BRONZE, Louisville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"If eyes could speak what would they say?"-The Book Thief


Finite love found searching in murky thought puddle
In still places loud with unspoken words I barely stand
Barefoot on broken-glass beach with mind a’muddle
Feet bled raw as shattered heart; Deep cuts on life’s sand.

They’re rocky dreams run aground on boats that never
Left the shore; Leaky ships sinking in shallow soul. Heart
Needs treasure constant horizons where the Sun does e’er
Rise reflecting true life off shattered love as breathtaking art.

Infinite love found searching in unpredictable tide living
In still places loud with unbroken promises I dare dance
Barefoot on mosaic-life beach with heart e’er a’giving;
Harshest blood washed forever away in Ocean’s romance.

I’m off to truer worlds, the rising Sun reflecting o’er me
As I learn to long love with the immensity of the sea.


The author's comments:

explanation oft kills art


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on Nov. 20 2014 at 6:16 pm
ifeyescouldspeak BRONZE, Louisville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"If eyes could speak what would they say?"-The Book Thief

Thank you so much! I really needed that encouragement today :)

on Nov. 20 2014 at 12:36 pm
Princess.Renda GOLD, Travelers Rest, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"All the world is made of faith, trust, and pixie dust." --J.M. Barrie, Peter Pan

I love this!!! Its so beautiful and well written and just amazing! ^^ You have crazy talent, babe <3 Keep writing, dear :)