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Mindful Thinking

February 20, 2015
By joebro SILVER, Compton, California
joebro SILVER, Compton, California
9 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dreams are like a box of chocolates, if you hold on and think about them for to long it will all start to melt away.


it was like a dream when i seen the pic

her brown silk skin and her kinky hair is what made my hormonal clock tic

my mind and thoughts began racing like nascar's

but i doubt that i wouuld be up to par

with this one person who beauty makes the roses and turnips blossom as she walks by

her fragrance is so sweet that butterflies would cover her from her head to her feet

and the sun and stars would get jelous just by the glow of her smile

but these are only thoughts i've been having for a while


The author's comments:

was asked to write this about some girl so yea i did


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Mckay ELITE said...
on Mar. 3 2015 at 9:55 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

Nicely written. Just polish some of the misspellings. But this, joebro, is a really good.

joebro SILVER said...
on Feb. 24 2015 at 11:09 am
joebro SILVER, Compton, California
9 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dreams are like a box of chocolates, if you hold on and think about them for to long it will all start to melt away.

thank you so much ill keep trying not to disappoint you

joebro SILVER said...
on Feb. 24 2015 at 11:08 am
joebro SILVER, Compton, California
9 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dreams are like a box of chocolates, if you hold on and think about them for to long it will all start to melt away.

oh my gosh thank you so much like I really appreciate it so much, and ill keep trying my best to impress you

RealRiter GOLD said...
on Feb. 23 2015 at 5:04 pm
RealRiter GOLD, Astoria, Oregon
10 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I did not fail 101 times, but I simply found 101 ways that did not work." -Thomas Edison

Yeah, its good! It has your signature rhythm, rhyme scheme, and tone, and of course, it`s talking about a girl.:)

on Feb. 23 2015 at 1:19 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret" -Ambrose Bierce
" Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)"
"Don't go where the path leads you. Go instead where there's no path and leave a trail ;)"-R.W.Emerson

Really beautiful ^_^ I like it a lot. I like the way you describe her with such pureness, beauty and just amaze. It was so beautiful so keep it up I already 5 starred it Thank you for sharing this.