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Blood Tears & Hate

June 17, 2010
By ShytoyaB SILVER, Oxford, Alabama
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ShytoyaB SILVER, Oxford, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
There's gonna be some stuff u gonna see that's gonna make it hard To smile in the future, but through whatever you see, Through all the rain and all the pain, you gotta keep your sense of humor. you gotta be able to smile through all this bull~"~tupac

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Blood dripping all over the place.
Dried tears on my face.
Razor on the bathroom floor.
I don't feel any pain no more.
Looking around to see the damage i have done.
This time there was no place to run.
My passionate anger & hatered has found me.
I stop fighting through & just let those emotions flow & take over me.
They lefted me scarred up with busted blood veins.
All this fustration took me out of misery & pain.
Leaving me with this beautiful word always to remember.
When i saw my creation for the first timeit looked nice & tender.
So now when you look down at my arm you'll see.
All the pain, misery, hurt, decieving, mistreating, abondonment you put me through.
If you really want to know who did this to me..
Just look in your mirror & you'll see...
It was YOU!!!!!!

© Rebecca S., Coventry, RI

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i was really angry & those were the thoughts in mii head
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ShytoyaB SILVER said...
on Aug. 11 2010 at 7:44 pm
ShytoyaB SILVER, Oxford, Alabama
6 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
There's gonna be some stuff u gonna see that's gonna make it hard To smile in the future, but through whatever you see, Through all the rain and all the pain, you gotta keep your sense of humor. you gotta be able to smile through all this bull~"~tupac

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i really appreciate that
ShytoyaB SILVER said...
on Aug. 11 2010 at 7:42 pm
ShytoyaB SILVER, Oxford, Alabama
6 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
There's gonna be some stuff u gonna see that's gonna make it hard To smile in the future, but through whatever you see, Through all the rain and all the pain, you gotta keep your sense of humor. you gotta be able to smile through all this bull~"~tupac

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thanks so much
katie_bugg GOLD said...
on Aug. 9 2010 at 1:40 am
katie_bugg GOLD, Scott Depot, West Virginia
14 articles 14 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
"But my heart, it is brighter than all the many stars in the sky"









-Edgar Allan Poe

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This is an amazing poem. I can honestly say i can relate to this. I love the ending, and the whole poem was great.

:D

oh, thanks for the comment!

Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 8 2010 at 12:00 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1632 comments

Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

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This is very sad, but I found myself liking it. I could tell that it was written with passion, and for that I applaud you. The poem was finished off nicely.
SaltwaterRoom PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 6 2010 at 9:17 pm
SaltwaterRoom PLATINUM, Scottsdale, Arizona
38 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you do will be insignificant, but it's very important that you do it."

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Very sad...
ShytoyaB SILVER said...
on Jul. 21 2010 at 10:24 pm
ShytoyaB SILVER, Oxford, Alabama
6 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
There's gonna be some stuff u gonna see that's gonna make it hard To smile in the future, but through whatever you see, Through all the rain and all the pain, you gotta keep your sense of humor. you gotta be able to smile through all this bull~"~tupac

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please give feedback.......thanks