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Moving On MAG

September 29, 2008
By Monica C., Union, NJ, Union, NJ

I finally threw
Out all the poems that I wrote
About you today

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on Dec. 9 2011 at 8:50 am
ManekiNeko SILVER, Cincinnati, Ohio
8 articles 1 photo 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It is better to keep your mouth shut and be thought a fool than to open it and prove it to be true."

You have 8 syllables in the second line.

shizuka BRONZE said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 4:33 pm
shizuka BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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and the picture really matches the poem :D really love them both

shizuka BRONZE said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 4:31 pm
shizuka BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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i agree, this is one of the amazing works ever

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on Nov. 17 2011 at 10:31 pm
Beautifulmonsta BRONZE, New Bedford, Massachusetts
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i was just about to say the same thing lol

on Nov. 8 2011 at 8:35 am
Countrylife4 GOLD, Maine
11 articles 4 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Someday soon we're gonna catch that dream we've been chasing"
"Seven days without a horse makes one weak."
"The worst part of riding is when you dismount."

Insult my clothes, I say, “Okay, thanks for the compliment.”
Insult the way I look, I say, “Thanks for notifying me.”
Mock me and say riding isn’t a sport, and I’ll say,”You say that ’cause you can’t ride.” But before you make fun of my horse, make sure you have “911″ on your speed dial.

I loved that! Great Job!! :D

on Oct. 29 2011 at 11:54 am
WithEyesWideOpen BRONZE, Wayne, Pennsylvania
2 articles 22 photos 242 comments

Favorite Quote:
You may say I'm a dreamer, but I'm not the only one.

that's what a haiku is supposed t be..

on Oct. 26 2011 at 12:52 pm
!.........That was short......!

weasel123 said...
on Sep. 6 2011 at 10:42 am
weasel123, Carrollton, Texas
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I like this poem because almost ever one in this world has had a hardship and how they need to move on. Good poem.

on Aug. 29 2011 at 5:11 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2216 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"

Strong, independent, emotional. You, my dear, know how to write an haiku, even though it doesn't have any nature in it ;)

on Aug. 21 2011 at 2:19 pm
Milly.Hester BRONZE, Central City, Kentucky
4 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
be who you wanna be not what poeple want you to be



on Aug. 16 2011 at 8:50 pm
Jessi_suarez1 GOLD, Kissimmee, Florida
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just remove that. but overall i love it! very independent and inpowering. good job!

on Jul. 30 2011 at 7:29 pm
HannahMarie17 BRONZE, Pasadena, Maryland
2 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass. It's about learning to dance in the rain." - Anonymous

I need to do what this author did. I completely liove and feel this piece. Keep writing!


on Jul. 19 2011 at 1:26 pm
A.M.Wilson DIAMOND, Midland, Texas
99 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
You can't choose who you love but you can love who you choose.

this is indeed a good poem


on Jul. 16 2011 at 10:45 am
Terminal_Laziness PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 773 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

Great job! I just wrote two books called nightstalker and the beast. please check them out and read them, and make sure u post comments! Thanks! :D (sorry for advertizing!)

on Jul. 14 2011 at 12:32 pm
NEVER_Perfect SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
6 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Is What It Is"

I love this.. & I remember a day i did the same. Those 3 words show a new beginninq to a different part of life. Great Job :)

on Jul. 13 2011 at 3:16 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

Could you look at my haiku poems Doubt, All Alone, and Seeing Your Soul, please? Thank you!

on Jun. 12 2011 at 3:35 pm
freeflow23 GOLD, Durham, North Carolina
15 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
Saul saw Goliath as too big to kill. David saw he was too big to miss.

It's a bit too literal for me.

lmd_4994 GOLD said...
on May. 21 2011 at 7:28 pm
lmd_4994 GOLD, Union Grove, Alabama
13 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
"May you live every day of your life" - Jonathan Swift

take out the "that" and its perfect! :)