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Moving On MAG

September 29, 2008
By Monica C., Union, NJ, Union, NJ

I finally threw
Out all the poems that I wrote
About you today

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on Dec. 8 2009 at 11:29 am
S3xL!pz911 BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Even in the loudest crowd I will hear your voice asking for my forgiveness

Wow. Great job. So powerful

on Oct. 8 2009 at 3:06 pm
mellow_melon PLATINUM, Jefferson, Maryland
41 articles 14 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but my the number of moments that take our breath away."

nice poem!! i love how well it gets the feeling across in just the three lines! good job!

JackXD SILVER said...
on Oct. 7 2009 at 3:28 pm
JackXD SILVER, Houston, Texas
9 articles 15 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
this may not be a quote but i really love the lyrics-Trust in me the way I trusted you I know we could have done this together If you believed in me like I believed in you My heart would be forever in your hands-all that remains-forever in your hands

awesome poem! it is very good!

DW SILVER said...
on Sep. 16 2009 at 6:38 pm
DW SILVER, Denver, Colorado
9 articles 0 photos 20 comments
I think ur second line has 8 syllables instead of 7 but its really good!!!

on Aug. 8 2009 at 7:39 pm
Vindictive_Love BRONZE, Abq, New Mexico
1 article 5 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
Talent wins games, but teamwork and intelligence wins championships.
Michael Jordan

Whatever you do in life, will be insignificant, but it's very important that you do it.
Mahatma Ghandi

haha short yet strong. i wish i could be this strong. maybe beccause of you i will get around to doing it. thanks! lol

on Aug. 8 2009 at 3:52 pm
apgirl94 SILVER, Allen Park, Michigan
6 articles 1 photo 2 comments
Verrry good, its short but it shows soo much (:

on May. 9 2009 at 4:31 pm
GreenWriter826 PLATINUM, McAllen, Texas
21 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
''Their fruits like honey to the throat
But poison in the blood'' - Christina Georgina Rossetti "Goblin Market"

short and just as meaning full as a full novel...bravo...

adriana said...
on Apr. 8 2009 at 5:19 pm
short sweet and simple but yet it says alot good job :)

E.Lee GOLD said...
on Mar. 16 2009 at 7:44 pm
E.Lee GOLD, Akron, Ohio
15 articles 0 photos 168 comments
really short..but has a ton of meaning...i like it!

and i can totally relate too..moving on is hard. but forgetting is even harder!!

on Mar. 12 2009 at 10:31 pm
psycholinzmeier GOLD, Kaukauna, Wisconsin
10 articles 0 photos 42 comments
tht had to be so hard. i want to throw away the poems i wrote about a guy but im to scared. congrates on doing so.

on Mar. 3 2009 at 1:00 am
CrazyRocker4Life BRONZE, Lacey, Washington
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

I need to get the guts to do that ASAP...

on Mar. 2 2009 at 4:32 pm
EternityBroken GOLD, Hooker, Oklahoma
17 articles 2 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is impossible to love and be wise.

painful, i can never bring myself to throw out the poems that hurt me so. i'm glad u can tho. insperational work

Arden22 said...
on Feb. 21 2009 at 9:15 pm
I like poems like these that say less and mean more. :) It's harder then most people think.

[Poet]. BRONZE said...
on Feb. 19 2009 at 4:12 pm
[Poet]. BRONZE, Belleville, Illinois
4 articles 0 photos 2 comments
NiCe...buTt.. [iDonT geT iT!]

bRonwYn_e GOLD said...
on Feb. 15 2009 at 4:12 pm
bRonwYn_e GOLD, Bon Aqua, Tennessee
19 articles 1 photo 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Denial is expected in the face of puuure eeevil.


rierie. said...
on Feb. 4 2009 at 1:10 am
that's so weird.

I was just thinking the same.


good good.

Cindy (: said...
on Jan. 30 2009 at 9:11 pm
Great Job (:

abc said...
on Jan. 29 2009 at 8:27 pm