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Moving On MAG

September 29, 2008
By Monica C., Union, NJ, Union, NJ

I finally threw
Out all the poems that I wrote
About you today

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on May. 19 2011 at 12:44 pm
swimchick BRONZE, Exeter, Pennsylvania
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The second line has eight syllables.

on May. 4 2011 at 9:08 am
SATVIK SILVER, Kanpur, Other
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Favorite Quote:


Tree18 BRONZE said...
on May. 3 2011 at 1:41 pm
Tree18 BRONZE, Dittmer, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Shoot for the Moon, If you miss you'll still land among the Stars"

I love this! I usually cant get into haikus but this one I could really relate to! Great job!

shizuka BRONZE said...
on Apr. 5 2011 at 4:22 pm
shizuka BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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so deep! i enjoy this poem

on Mar. 28 2011 at 1:39 pm
luv_4_broadway GOLD, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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exactly! I love the picture too :)

on Mar. 8 2011 at 6:31 pm
WritingJulia SILVER, Binghamton, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Kind words can be short and easy to say, but their echoes are truly endless." -Mother Theresa

I know I've commented on this b4, but every time I read it it gets better!

on Feb. 23 2011 at 12:08 pm
KaylaKandiBear BRONZE, Streamwood, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"If you're sad, go buy yourself a happy meal and play with some kittens."

simple and powerful. good.

on Feb. 18 2011 at 4:27 pm GOLD, Bradenton, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
" She completly fell for him, but he didnt even stumble...</3" -unknown.

this was interesting..


on Feb. 10 2011 at 2:45 pm
Lilybean17 SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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haha! sweet!

on Feb. 5 2011 at 2:13 pm
KrazyButCool BRONZE, Laplace, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
Girls are like phones. We love to be held, talked too but if you press the wrong button you'll be disconnected!

Very deep I love it!

on Feb. 4 2011 at 9:34 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

Koolness ^^ awesome job, i love itt

on Jan. 24 2011 at 6:39 pm
AnnynomusK BRONZE, Seattle, Washington
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I loved the poem i just think people could take it different ways. like  nasty break up. or a falll out with a friend

on Jan. 20 2011 at 5:54 pm
wow this poem really opened my eyes im going threw a really hard break up and it just made me think that it is possible to get him out of my head... i thought it was love and he bailed on me for another girl. anyways! I LOVE YOUR POEM!

Alia_Tan GOLD said...
on Jan. 17 2011 at 9:01 pm
Alia_Tan GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I gotta right to sing the blues/
gotta right to moan and sigh/
I gotta right to sit and cry" From "I gotta right to sing the blues" By Louis Armstrong

brilliant! :D :D :D good for you! please read and comment on my haikus! :)

Shahed GOLD said...
on Jan. 13 2011 at 7:18 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

Very good!



on Jan. 5 2011 at 7:28 am
pnkninja11 BRONZE, Partlow, Virginia
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This is a good poem. It is exactly what I want to do. But I need to write so I can have more pages.

on Dec. 26 2010 at 6:34 pm
Seelix PLATINUM, Chandler, Arizona
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Wow! This is amazing- what everyone wants to do, but never can=( Excellent job!

on Dec. 13 2010 at 11:35 am
BabyVickie SILVER, Taos, New Mexico
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Very t the point and clear as day I love it !

on Dec. 12 2010 at 4:00 pm
justsmileanddance PLATINUM, Montgomery, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
Happiness can be found, even in the darkest of times, if one only remembers to turn on the light.
-Albus Dumbledore

 me too!!! 

on Dec. 11 2010 at 8:38 pm
sparksfly BRONZE, Port Monmouth, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
In a world filled with hate, we must still dare to love. - Michael Jackson

To put it simply, I love it.