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Moving On MAG

September 29, 2008
By Monica C., Union, NJ, Union, NJ

I finally threw
Out all the poems that I wrote
About you today

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inspir3d GOLD said...
on Jul. 7 2010 at 3:58 pm
inspir3d GOLD, Norcross, Georgia
11 articles 2 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
We're all just looking for attention, to be discovered overnight. We're all frustrated by the popular ones that claim the limelight before they fall to pieces. So many of us are stuck under the radar--what makes me different? You decide!

This is why people write haikus! It's as effective as a punch to the gut; short, but leaves an unforgettable impact. GREAT WORK! very thought provoking and deep. Check out my haiku Desperate? thanks :)

on May. 25 2010 at 3:01 pm
Kaylarebekah131719 PLATINUM, McDonough, Georgia
21 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
*(ending to Faith) I told myself that, if I avoided him at all costs, I'd be okay; so I did, and I was, and he never game back.
* More than we rely on other people, we rely on other peoples ignorance.
*Just a little thank you, to all the morons that led me to learning to write well; you are the razors of the pen that draws the blood I write with. I owe it all to your mistakes.

Amazing how much power such a short sentiment can have; truly inspirational.

MonicaC said...
on May. 21 2010 at 5:19 am
Hi! Sure, go ahead. I feel very honored to somehow be a part of someone else's work (:

melone96 said...
on May. 15 2010 at 3:42 pm
melone96, White Sulphur Springs, West Virginia
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its funny how many people post comments about how short haikus are...umm, duh..they r haikus - only 17 sylables..that's short...

on May. 12 2010 at 9:39 am
bound4life4ever PLATINUM, Jamaica, New York
32 articles 0 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never take life seriously. Nobody gets out alive anyway.


hey... i wrote a poem. b ut the 1st stanza kinda stole this peom. i wanted 2 put it up on teenink but i wanted 2 ask u if its ok if i can use ur poem in my poem. thanx

on May. 9 2010 at 2:59 pm
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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I wish it was just that simple. Though I don't usually throw them away, they're my inspirations 

Essa said...
on May. 6 2010 at 1:20 pm
its short, but i like it

hbanana BRONZE said...
on May. 3 2010 at 9:43 am
hbanana BRONZE, Bhutan, Alabama
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it's a haiku kid, duhh it's short.

on May. 2 2010 at 7:05 pm
superswim_19 PLATINUM, Grand Haven, Michigan
21 articles 25 photos 143 comments
I LOVE THIS!!! it is so... i don't know. accurate, i guess.

Eric DeMeo said...
on Apr. 30 2010 at 9:34 am
Eric DeMeo, Saugus, Massachusetts
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Short poem,and written good

Nyrihaz said...
on Apr. 26 2010 at 9:49 pm
Nyrihaz, Isabela, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Listen to the screams a silent room makes"

Oh, if only I could actually do just that...

Great Job!

on Apr. 21 2010 at 11:08 pm
GreenLover SILVER, Anaheim, California
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time is but a number

short but good. ive done that and it was such a relief

on Apr. 14 2010 at 10:19 pm
Clementine SILVER, Gustavus, Alaska
5 articles 2 photos 47 comments
This short poem makes me think of so many things...very well done.

xlindseyx166 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 12:07 pm
xlindseyx166, Saugus, Massachusetts
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i really liked it just because you got out the point with pretty much one sentence. i think almost anyone can relate to what you said

amanda16 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 11:45 am
amanda16, Saugus, Massachusetts
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I like this poem because its simple, but it gets the point across. (:

on Apr. 14 2010 at 11:45 am
alessaxoxo BRONZE, Saugus, Massachusetts
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I really like this Haiku poem you wrote. I feel as though your writing about someone and have gotten over them and threw out everything you ever wrote about them. Its simple but has alot of meaning towards it.

Victoriaaa14 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 8:57 am
Victoriaaa14, Saugus, Massachusetts
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i like it. Its soo simple, but it has so much meaning. Everyone person in this world can relate to heart break and moving, Moving on is good. So isnt this poem.

on Apr. 7 2010 at 9:00 am
shelby_kat DIAMOND, Warren, Ohio
72 articles 3 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can sum up everything I've learned about life in three words; it goes on." -Robert Frost

(: good job

on Apr. 2 2010 at 6:14 pm
AmberRose SILVER, Richmond, Virginia
5 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Even Monkeys fall out of trees."

It's so simple!!! Yet it has so much depth!!! I love it! Please comment on some of my work!!! :)

on Mar. 28 2010 at 7:46 pm
CardinalRunner BRONZE, Holland, Michigan
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This has so much meaning even thou its short. At first when i read it thru once i thought this seems odd...and once i read it thru twice more i got the message. I love it!!! (: