You & Me | Teen Ink

You & Me

October 8, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)


I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.


The author's comments:
Isn't it so sad when you see an old friend and their whole personality and outlook on life has changed...and not for the good. Well that's what inspired me for this poem...I hope you enjoyed it

Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 869 comments.


on Sep. 22 2011 at 7:19 am
EmiliePhillippi GOLD, Holland, Michigan
16 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
But in your hearts set apart Christ as Lord. Always be prepared to give an answer to everyone who asks you to give the reason for the hope that you have. But do this with gentleness and respect.
1 Peter 3:15 

Wow. Exactly what I'm going through RIGHT NOW! its a great poem, thank you for sharing!

on Sep. 19 2011 at 10:38 am
Lctrewyn BRONZE, Beloit, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 1 comment
i love this .

on Sep. 17 2011 at 12:27 pm
Gilbert, BRONZE, Houston, Texas
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Impossible is Impossible"

That is so true...time ages and people change

on Sep. 17 2011 at 12:11 pm
paigeturner9 PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
40 articles 0 photos 17 comments
this is amazing! So sad, but so well written :)

jaque1995 said...
on Sep. 16 2011 at 8:44 am
this poem is the best i love it :)

on Sep. 13 2011 at 10:26 am
Brianna:This is a really super good poem!!!! Valerie:super good

on Sep. 8 2011 at 12:22 pm
WeAllBurn PLATINUM, Vermilion, Ohio
24 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The weak can never forgive. Forgiveness is the attribute of the strong." ~Mahatma Gandhi

this is utterly breathtaking <3

i know exactly what you mean by this, and it just sucks. :/

please read some of my work too, i believe you would really like my poem, "Fake".


on Sep. 1 2011 at 7:33 pm
Sarah0227 BRONZE, Los Angeles, California
2 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
If your slate is clean then you can throw stones if your slate is not then leave her alone!
-Jesus Christ Superstar-

this is really mooving the exact same thing happened to me recently and your poem hit me and....i cant even find the words to explain it its really fantastic great job! :D

on Aug. 28 2011 at 6:32 am
Jenga142 BRONZE, Stoke On Trent, Other
2 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
all animals are equal but some are more equal than others

really moving and clever because most readers can find a way to relate to it.Fantastic,well done !!!!please checkout my work too!!!! xxxx

on Aug. 26 2011 at 9:26 pm
yousaypotato... SILVER, Peacedale, Rhode Island
9 articles 1 photo 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A good friend will bail you out of jail. But a best friend will be sitting right there with you saying 'Dang, we really screwed up this time.'"

thank you for writing this. me and my bff went trhough this. she got a concussion and suffered a personality change without knowing it, and she changed for the worse. it was hard. youll get through this.

reg93 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 26 2011 at 6:19 pm
reg93 BRONZE, Billings, Montana
2 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left."
— Marilyn Monroe

okay, you are an amazing writer!!!!!!!!!! (:

spency SILVER said...
on Aug. 26 2011 at 5:10 pm
spency SILVER, Irvington, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"DON'T GIVE UP,REACH YOURSELF UP"

VERY NICE,WOWWWWWWW,PLEASE VISIT ME

on Aug. 22 2011 at 3:46 pm
bloodysouls GOLD, Nevada, Other
11 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
the dawn the death the fight to the final breath

haha your apsolutely right this is fabulous..haha i love it..

on Aug. 17 2011 at 10:47 pm
Jessi_suarez1 GOLD, Kissimmee, Florida
16 articles 0 photos 98 comments
i love it! good job!

on Aug. 9 2011 at 4:07 pm
mnmchangy SILVER, St.paul, Minnesota
5 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
The meaning of life, is to live life with a meaning

Your poems speak the truth! I love your poems:)

on Aug. 8 2011 at 11:36 am
tati_pax BRONZE, West Seneca, New York
1 article 5 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Life is like a movie, if you've sat through more than half of it and its sucked every second so far, it probably isn't gonna get great right at the end and make it all worthwhile. None should blame you for walking out early.” -Doug Stanhope

ilove this! it made me think of someone in my life..& iwondered if maybe even ihad changed.

alvarezs46 said...
on Aug. 8 2011 at 10:49 am
alvarezs46, LaGrange, Illinois
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment
I think this poem speaks to alot of people, including me. Sometimes you don't realize things about a person you thought you knew until a large amount of time has passed. It happens.

on Aug. 4 2011 at 12:16 pm
BriannaR BRONZE, Willingboro, New Jersey
1 article 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
If we are facing in the right direction, all we have to do is keep on walking.
Zen Proverb

This is Brilliant, i think iread this a thousands times before i made a comment.

GaelicC said...
on Aug. 4 2011 at 6:16 am
GaelicC, Longford, Other
0 articles 0 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
No -Rosa Parks

I love this! Well done!

on Jul. 21 2011 at 6:06 pm
LunaIsNotHere BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
4 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I admire the concept of selling your soul for the sake of an unforgettable performance"

I can relate to this poem...this guy who I've had a huge crush on since 7th grade used to be the sweetest guy and my sophomore year in HS I hadn't seen much of him at all, Junior year I realized he is now very arrogant and self centered. It breaks my heart. He never used to be like this.