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Opulence MAG

May 1, 2008
By AquaGem SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
AquaGem SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Nobody will ever win the Battle of the Sexes. There's just too much fraternizing with the enemy. ~Henry Kissinger

Life it too short to let you matter.


I’ve been watching him for days now. When he leaves his house to go to school, I’m the one carefully tailing him, switching cars every day to make myself look less suspicious. If he ever sneaks out of his second-story room, I’ll be the one silently watching from a nearby tree. In class when he turns, feeling eyes on the back of his head, I’m the one who sent the hair on the back of his neck up on end. I am the girl whose shadow is always slightly overlapping his.

Being assigned to watch him almost makes me
feel like I’m not a stalker. Though I’m only 17, I’m a full-fledged member of the organization known as O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. I’ve been with them since the ­tender age of five. It’s my home. Being an orphan, my office is also my permanent residence, the couch a fold-out bed. There are many others like me: no family. A lot of us are loners and haven’t chosen this route for ourselves.

I’m a tracker. I have been for years and some might say that I am the best at not being the best. In other words, I’m great at being invisible. Or at not being noticed. It’s not as hard as the others in the organization think. Being young and female is good, since most we track are young. Seeing me around younger people – my age, actually – doesn’t raise alarm bells. It helps that I’m cute. With a small frame, light hazel eyes, and short blond hair that curls under my chin, I don’t appear threatening. Of course, my ­organization-funded training doesn’t back that theory.

Soon I won’t be tracking down others with the power. They are finally going to give me an apprentice. After years of mastering everything I’ve been taught, they see my potential. That’s not to say I know everything. Even with my extended life I won’t be able to learn all the things I want to. If only this annoying boy would show the signs. It’s been almost a week. If he doesn’t show soon, they’ll reassign me. That much longer until I get my apprentice.

So here I am, sipping a latté and waiting for the Target to leave for school. I have been put in all of his classes in case something happens there, though I graduated high school years ago. Private tutors sped things up. With no family or personal ties, I had lots of time to devote to my studies. Martial arts black belts. Twelve languages, not including English. Everything a girl needs for a serious career in the agency. Such positions of power are not handed out easily. You must prove yourself many times over.

The Target and I have never spoken, but I know a lot about him. His file told me some, but after watching him for only a few days, I feel confident in saying that I know things no one else does. Not just the obvious, either. He resents his father and is protective of his mother, which makes me suspect the father is less than faithful. He smiles often but doesn’t make a lot of eye contact. He usually only speaks when spoken to. Although he has many friends, he isn’t close with any of them. The Target is observant, a watcher. This leads me to believe we would get along if he shows any promise.

I look down at my watch, then back at his house a few blocks away. The Target is late, which means I’ll be late too. Today my ride is a shiny black sports car, not out of place in this suburb full of midlife-crisis men. I turn on the engine impatiently. I’m fiddling with the radio when I hear something. I don’t feel any immediate danger, and I know to trust those feelings. But I ­also know that something is off.

Just as I am about to get out of the car and pretend to look in the trunk, the passenger door opens. I look up in surprise as the Target slides into the seat next to me. I grin, quite pleased by this turn of events. This is definitely a good sign. Perhaps intuition is strong in him. That would be good for my apprentice to have, complementary. I could handle having to deal with that.

“Hello, Lenna. Why have you been following me for a week now?” the Target asks lightly, conversationally, his first words ever said in my direction.

Ah, one of my many aliases. The organization set it up so that whenever I’m on a case, I get a new name, past, and present. It’s very powerful. The organization can basically do anything it needs; it has people everywhere imaginable. I’m just one of many, though there aren’t that many at the top, as I am. They don’t trust many to be trackers. Or to be apprentices. All of the full members have the power, though we control others to get things done.

My smile deepens as I say in my authoritative, professional voice, “My real name is Jade. I am a witch of the moon and a tracker for the organization known as O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. You are also a witch. We would like to formally welcome you into the organization as my apprentice. Here is my card for verification.”

Jade Wordsworth
Tracker for O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E
Official Political Understanding Lending ­Everyone ­Navigation for Co-Existing Ethereals
Office hours: 8 a.m.-3 p.m. Mon-Sat
Phone: 555-5555
Proud league of witches of the sun and moon.
Worldwide.

“What do you mean ‘moon and sun’? Or ‘tracker’?” he asks, still looking at my card like it’s going to ­disappear.

“Types of magic. Moon is all about spells, the sun is more potion-based, though each type of witchcraft involves the other somehow. As a tracker, I find people like you and I bring them to O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. Every witch must register, train, and become a member by law. In fact, the organization is like a government targeted toward witches,” I explain with a smile, loving the fact that this time I get to teach the newbie.

“Magic? Seriously?” he asks, eyes wide, meeting mine. They are large, yellow, and catlike.

I click a button on my left, automatically locking the doors. I put the car into drive, pulling out onto the road. As an afterthought I add as a courtesy, “I think you had better come with me.” .



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on Jun. 5 2011 at 8:32 pm
nancygee BRONZE, Forest Hills, New York
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i completely agree-i was expecting some sort of CIA, action packed type theme, definitely Bourne Identity-esque. But the quality of the writing is pretty good(:

on Jun. 2 2011 at 2:59 pm
omg this is soo cool i luv how confindent the main charactor  is i immediatly knew i liked her. she's clever and funny keep up the good work!!

on Jun. 1 2011 at 6:13 pm
emastenbrook911 BRONZE, Mattawan, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
thou shall treat others how thou shall wish to be treated.

i think there is a correction to be made i think it would be a great book and i would recomend it to all of my friends,

PoetryGirl said...
on May. 27 2011 at 9:19 am
Yes, I suppose the definition of a "nonfiction" witch refers to a religious belief.  I just thought it was commonly accepted that it is an evil religion.  I know I'm going to get slammed for that, so I think I'm done with the discussion.  I believe witches, real life or fictional, are evil. 

on May. 25 2011 at 3:34 pm
Marina_V.S. BRONZE, Weybridge, Random Island, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Ah, I'm one of those weird people who goes through their note books just to read the quotes, so finding a fav is hard for me... 'There is no pleasure in having nothing to do; the fun is in having lots to do and not doing it' - Mary Little ;)

Personally, PoetryGirl, I don't know where you get the notion that real world witches are evil, or why this would effect a work of fiction just because it has (in the first couple pages) many similarities to our world.

Back to the evil thing; I'm not sure what your sources are, but if you google 'what is a witch', you'll find that only the first fictional definition is dirrectly related to the word 'evil', and the most nonfictional (#2) is a religious belief.


on May. 25 2011 at 12:10 pm
skyblue95 PLATINUM, Bear, Delaware
35 articles 1 photo 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am paraphrasing, of course. "My only fear is that when they are turned to loving they will find we are turned to hating." -Reverand Msimangu, Cry, The Beloved Country (a book by Alan Paton)

I love this! I think your wording and the story line itself is perfect. You have to write more! Maybe you could turn it into a novel? Keep writing!

on May. 23 2011 at 9:15 pm
WildeWriter BRONZE, Springfield, Missouri
2 articles 1 photo 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you believe you can make a living as a writer, you already have enough ego already."

Agreed :) You've got me super curious about what happens next!

PoetryGirl said...
on May. 20 2011 at 10:26 am
Of course it's fiction.  That's not really the point.  If she were a girl in an obviously fantasy world, that would be one thing, though still not ideal.  (Witches are a representation of evil, and we all know that they really do exist, so we shouldn't make them the "good guys".)  But she's in today's ordinary world, and to me it's uncomfortably close to occult.

on May. 18 2011 at 8:00 pm
radicalhonesty GOLD, Alpharetta, Georgia
12 articles 2 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is no situation, facet, or aspect of life that cannot be improved with pizza. -Daria

it wasnt that random, in the beginning she did mention how she has an "extended life". but i agree, it was a huge suprise

great writing!


on May. 17 2011 at 8:10 am
chocolate12345 BRONZE, Lititz, Pennsylvania
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love the word choices. however, it all happens too fast and is cliche. i would be happier if it was a spy organization or assassins (think Jason Bourne) rather than "witches". much of it was just themes used in other stories.

Gandhi123 said...
on May. 13 2011 at 8:16 am
Gandhi123, Mattwan, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
an eye for an eye will make the whole world blind

good story!

kinda

 


Platinum said...
on May. 12 2011 at 8:36 am
Weegee when you read this say "AYE"

Gandhi123 said...
on May. 12 2011 at 8:31 am
Gandhi123, Mattwan, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
an eye for an eye will make the whole world blind

well i guess so

WEEGEE said...
on May. 12 2011 at 8:17 am
YES! PLATINUM

on May. 11 2011 at 11:00 am
kkayla3897 BRONZE, Ogden, Utah
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Mage: a magician or sorcerer.

Platinum said...
on May. 11 2011 at 8:33 am
OYAs hi to you. Hello to story.

OYAs said...
on May. 11 2011 at 8:31 am
IT WAS SO WEIRD STALKER!!!!!!!!!

Jane3 SILVER said...
on May. 10 2011 at 9:26 pm
Jane3 SILVER, Bryn Mawr, Pennsylvania
8 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
“The capital-T truth is about life BEFORE death. It is about the real value of a real education, which has almost nothing to do with knowledge, and everything to do with simple awareness; awareness of what is so real and essential, so hidden in plain sight all around us, all the time, that we have to keep reminding ourselves over and over: this is water. This is water.”

Yes, yes. yes you must write more! what happens next?

on May. 8 2011 at 12:23 pm
TheRunningPrincess, Columbus, Ohio
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To give anything less than your best is to sacrifice the gift"

What's a mage?

on May. 5 2011 at 4:25 pm
can u tell me what this is about