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Opulence MAG

May 1, 2008
By AquaGem SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
AquaGem SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Nobody will ever win the Battle of the Sexes. There's just too much fraternizing with the enemy. ~Henry Kissinger

Life it too short to let you matter.


I’ve been watching him for days now. When he leaves his house to go to school, I’m the one carefully tailing him, switching cars every day to make myself look less suspicious. If he ever sneaks out of his second-story room, I’ll be the one silently watching from a nearby tree. In class when he turns, feeling eyes on the back of his head, I’m the one who sent the hair on the back of his neck up on end. I am the girl whose shadow is always slightly overlapping his.

Being assigned to watch him almost makes me
feel like I’m not a stalker. Though I’m only 17, I’m a full-fledged member of the organization known as O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. I’ve been with them since the ­tender age of five. It’s my home. Being an orphan, my office is also my permanent residence, the couch a fold-out bed. There are many others like me: no family. A lot of us are loners and haven’t chosen this route for ourselves.

I’m a tracker. I have been for years and some might say that I am the best at not being the best. In other words, I’m great at being invisible. Or at not being noticed. It’s not as hard as the others in the organization think. Being young and female is good, since most we track are young. Seeing me around younger people – my age, actually – doesn’t raise alarm bells. It helps that I’m cute. With a small frame, light hazel eyes, and short blond hair that curls under my chin, I don’t appear threatening. Of course, my ­organization-funded training doesn’t back that theory.

Soon I won’t be tracking down others with the power. They are finally going to give me an apprentice. After years of mastering everything I’ve been taught, they see my potential. That’s not to say I know everything. Even with my extended life I won’t be able to learn all the things I want to. If only this annoying boy would show the signs. It’s been almost a week. If he doesn’t show soon, they’ll reassign me. That much longer until I get my apprentice.

So here I am, sipping a latté and waiting for the Target to leave for school. I have been put in all of his classes in case something happens there, though I graduated high school years ago. Private tutors sped things up. With no family or personal ties, I had lots of time to devote to my studies. Martial arts black belts. Twelve languages, not including English. Everything a girl needs for a serious career in the agency. Such positions of power are not handed out easily. You must prove yourself many times over.

The Target and I have never spoken, but I know a lot about him. His file told me some, but after watching him for only a few days, I feel confident in saying that I know things no one else does. Not just the obvious, either. He resents his father and is protective of his mother, which makes me suspect the father is less than faithful. He smiles often but doesn’t make a lot of eye contact. He usually only speaks when spoken to. Although he has many friends, he isn’t close with any of them. The Target is observant, a watcher. This leads me to believe we would get along if he shows any promise.

I look down at my watch, then back at his house a few blocks away. The Target is late, which means I’ll be late too. Today my ride is a shiny black sports car, not out of place in this suburb full of midlife-crisis men. I turn on the engine impatiently. I’m fiddling with the radio when I hear something. I don’t feel any immediate danger, and I know to trust those feelings. But I ­also know that something is off.

Just as I am about to get out of the car and pretend to look in the trunk, the passenger door opens. I look up in surprise as the Target slides into the seat next to me. I grin, quite pleased by this turn of events. This is definitely a good sign. Perhaps intuition is strong in him. That would be good for my apprentice to have, complementary. I could handle having to deal with that.

“Hello, Lenna. Why have you been following me for a week now?” the Target asks lightly, conversationally, his first words ever said in my direction.

Ah, one of my many aliases. The organization set it up so that whenever I’m on a case, I get a new name, past, and present. It’s very powerful. The organization can basically do anything it needs; it has people everywhere imaginable. I’m just one of many, though there aren’t that many at the top, as I am. They don’t trust many to be trackers. Or to be apprentices. All of the full members have the power, though we control others to get things done.

My smile deepens as I say in my authoritative, professional voice, “My real name is Jade. I am a witch of the moon and a tracker for the organization known as O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. You are also a witch. We would like to formally welcome you into the organization as my apprentice. Here is my card for verification.”

Jade Wordsworth
Tracker for O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E
Official Political Understanding Lending ­Everyone ­Navigation for Co-Existing Ethereals
Office hours: 8 a.m.-3 p.m. Mon-Sat
Phone: 555-5555
Proud league of witches of the sun and moon.
Worldwide.

“What do you mean ‘moon and sun’? Or ‘tracker’?” he asks, still looking at my card like it’s going to ­disappear.

“Types of magic. Moon is all about spells, the sun is more potion-based, though each type of witchcraft involves the other somehow. As a tracker, I find people like you and I bring them to O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. Every witch must register, train, and become a member by law. In fact, the organization is like a government targeted toward witches,” I explain with a smile, loving the fact that this time I get to teach the newbie.

“Magic? Seriously?” he asks, eyes wide, meeting mine. They are large, yellow, and catlike.

I click a button on my left, automatically locking the doors. I put the car into drive, pulling out onto the road. As an afterthought I add as a courtesy, “I think you had better come with me.” .



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Katsa08 SILVER said...
on Dec. 22 2010 at 8:29 am
Katsa08 SILVER, Sidney, Iowa
5 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't take yourself so seriously, no one else does."
"What others think of me is none of my business."

I think you have a very interesting idea, and i really thing that you should go on with it. Perhaps in the sequel (if you have one that is) you could include more about her troubled past? I think everyone would get a kick outta that! Keep writing...

on Dec. 20 2010 at 9:00 pm
writer500 BRONZE, Putnam, New York
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Man good deal! Nice writing! Hey check out some of my works and comment! Thanks everyone I appreciate it!

Country-Gal said...
on Dec. 17 2010 at 11:54 am
Country-Gal, Temple, Georgia
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Baby dont break me and i wont break you.

this is a very interesting story i guess.

on Dec. 13 2010 at 12:42 pm
Def_Leppard_fan120 SILVER, Lake Lorane, Florida
5 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you want your dreams to come true, Make them come true. If you want to win, Make it a win.
The only one that is stopping you from accomplish your dreams is YOU.

Hey Jake The Snake 2 things one Jake The snake was a wrestler and 2nd it ended where you least expect it to end.

on Dec. 10 2010 at 2:38 pm
Def_Leppard_fan120 SILVER, Lake Lorane, Florida
5 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you want your dreams to come true, Make them come true. If you want to win, Make it a win.
The only one that is stopping you from accomplish your dreams is YOU.

Wow. I can almost picture what she is going through. I mean no family that is sad. I want to read another one. Make another one this needs a second one.

on Dec. 8 2010 at 5:28 pm
Sacrifice018 SILVER, Griffin, Georgia
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lol idk some people just belive that. I mean it really could be a true story. so where did you get your inspiration.

on Dec. 8 2010 at 5:23 pm
CristalleCleare BRONZE, Scottsdale, Arizona
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life: it goes on." ~Robert Frost
"All I can do is be me. Whoever that is." ~Bob Dylan
"If girls dressed for boys, they'd walk around naked at all times." ~Betsey Johnson

how could this really happen? a witch of the moon? lol...

Abwell BRONZE said...
on Dec. 8 2010 at 4:33 pm
Abwell BRONZE, Greer, South Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 6 comments
yes she has

on Dec. 1 2010 at 5:46 pm
Sadia123456 BRONZE, New York, New York
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I love it man.Are u getting a magizine

 


Abwell BRONZE said...
on Dec. 1 2010 at 2:58 pm
Abwell BRONZE, Greer, South Carolina
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I love this! It is amazing!

on Nov. 30 2010 at 10:11 pm
Bnubbs PLATINUM, Goshen, Kentucky
21 articles 6 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let it be! All you need is love!

holy crow!!!! this is SOOOOO good!!!! please write another one!! i love it!!!!!

on Nov. 30 2010 at 5:59 pm
Sacrifice018 SILVER, Griffin, Georgia
9 articles 0 photos 23 comments
Sounds pretty good. although it is written very well. Is this a true story? Did this really happen? Or just a story you thought in your head. Regardless I really like it.

Lynsey BRONZE said...
on Nov. 30 2010 at 4:09 pm
Lynsey BRONZE, Portland, Connecticut
4 articles 5 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Imperfection is beauty, madness is genius and it's better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring." -Marilyn Monroe
"Sometimes you have to run away just to see who will follow." -Anonymous

this was written really well. I love how they used two things that most people would not assume give power. very good job!

on Nov. 30 2010 at 12:44 pm
Lacey1025 SILVER, Saint Helens, Oregon
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This is a really well- written, intresting story. Please write a sequel!

on Nov. 30 2010 at 10:42 am
dramaticgirl16 GOLD, New Gloucester, ME, Maine
17 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
You know that you are in love when the hardest thing to do is say good-bye!!

O My Word can you please write a sequel to this. I love it.

DD_Yellow GOLD said...
on Nov. 30 2010 at 8:31 am
DD_Yellow GOLD, Papillion, Nebraska
11 articles 1 photo 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
ce la vi :)

so good! i love it :) keep writing :)

on Nov. 29 2010 at 6:35 pm
princessfidget BRONZE, Natrona Heights, Pennsylvania
2 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life wouldn't be life if it didn't suck."
-One of my friends from FF

Just what I wanted to read! Something with magic that explains everything clearly! Great work! I hope you make another chapter to this!

on Nov. 17 2010 at 8:51 pm
Jesse-Marie- PLATINUM, Freehold, New Jersey
46 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To love is to live. Without love, what is life?"

Nice writing work. Very good :)

Keeta BRONZE said...
on Nov. 9 2010 at 5:41 am
Keeta BRONZE, Lehigh, Florida
4 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
the past cant be changed so live in the present.

i love all three of the opulences you have written i also love how were 1 leves off the next starts!!!! you are a amazing writter AquaGem, keep on writting

on Nov. 8 2010 at 10:18 pm
wefellinLAVA PLATINUM, Copper Cliff, Other
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Favorite Quote:
'you touched my heart, through it's shell'

I feel like you could put more effort into your vocabulary.  But don't get me wrong, I like this.